Agent Interview: Steven Chudney of The Chudney Agency

While literary agent Steven Chudney is a bit camera-​shy (I’ve worked around this via the “photo-​realistic” artwork I provided alongside his agency’s logo!), The Chudney Agency is devoted mostly to kidlit (about 10% of his list is Adult), and there are plenty of clients who sing his praises. That’s already got the OPB radar turned his way.

But when I learned that he was part of the marketing campaign for the 40th anniversary of Eloise, the launch of a line of kidlit books for Nickelodeon, and the development of the Cheerios board books, I knew he had to pop in to chat with us at OPB.

With that, let’s pour two cups of oolong, get comfy on some easy chairs, and have a chat with our new friend, Steven!

http://thechudneyagency.com/


RVC: What was the turning point that set you on the path to become a publishing professional? How early did that happen?

SC: Although I’m American born, I grew up and lived in Israel for 7 years as a young boy and teenager. I didn’t enjoy reading in Hebrew, and so I read a ton of British books for kids, like all of those lovely and kitschy Enid Blyton books. Then, I got my first real job working in a small English used bookstore in our town, Andy’s Books. Tons of paperbacks. I was about 12, before my bar mitzvah! That’s when I discovered Agatha Christie mysteries. I loved working in the bookstore and felt so lucky to be surrounded by books. To this day the scent of old books is quite intoxicating.

RVC: That helps explain how you went on to hold a number of different jobs in the book world (sales, marketing, licensing, and sub-​rights positions at Viking Penguin; Farrar, Straus & Giroux; Dell; Simon & Schuster, and Winslow Press). How has that range of experience positioned you to be a successful literary agent?

SC: It seems cumulatively I had the perfect background to become an agent. Every one of those positions offered me experience needed in my present job: how to negotiate, how to review a contract, how to think about a manuscript in terms of future marketing and sales potential. When I worked at Winslow Press (now defunct) I handled sub rights for the small list there and was lucky that they sent me to the Bologna Bookfair–so that was wonderful, of course, but it really opened up my eyes to the international scope of children’s books and introduced me to many foreign children’s publishers.

RVC: It must’ve been a real treat, then, being able to work on such big brands like Eloise and the Cheerios board books?

SC: It taught me the power of the brand, and specifically for an evergreen or legacy brand. Everyone knew Eloise, of course, and it was our responsibility to keep the book in the forefront of booksellers minds, so the 40th anniversary was a perfect opportunity to create more awareness and to increase sales.

Cheerios was very different. It’s not a literary brand, of course, but it was such a known commodity, a top brand–especially with mothers/​caregivers and snacking toddlers. At this point in my career, I was the director of licensing and product development at Simon & Schuster. I was charged with bringing in all kinds of licenses to see how they could be leveraged and made into books for children.

I kid you not, this is how it happened: I had read an article about the pincer grasp, which is a big milestone for toddlers in their fine motor development. So I was food shopping, rolling down the cereal aisle, probably thinking about work as one does, and I stopped to let a mother and her kid pass–their cart had 3 boxes of Cheerios in it. Somehow my brain made a connection with the article I had read and this cereal brand–and I knew I wanted to do Cheerios toddler board books. Back in the office I presented the brand and described that the board book pages needed to be thick so that a toddler could insert a Cheerio piece in a round indentation. Voila! The perfect book to help a toddler with their pincer grasp.

RVC: Wow. That’s an amazing story.

SC: I went on to negotiate the license with General Mills, though I eventually left S&S. By that time, I think there were three Cheerios books that had sold millions of copies. A shoutout to Lee Wade who was the art director at the time at S&S (she now has her own imprint at Random House). She designed and gave birth to all the books.

RVC: Since we’re talking about giving birth here…let’s move ahead to chat about you forming The Chudney Agency in 2002.

SC: I actually became an agent because I was in between jobs. I had foolishly quit a position without having anything else lined up (I did say it was foolish), and then September 11th happened and all of New York froze. For months…no jobs opened up, nothing. I needed to do something and it was suggested to me that I be an agent–and that’s exactly what I did.

I must say here I couldn’t have done any of this without the tremendous support of Ralph, my beloved partner when I founded the agency, who is now my husband. I literally would have been homeless had I tried to do this totally on my own. He was totally onboard and behind me from day one.

RVC: What would you have done differently, knowing what you know now?

SC: If I had to do it all over again, I would have tried to get a position with an agency to really learn the ropes. Doing it alone was a bit daunting, but I muddled through it. Getting clients was the easiest: if you were the new agent in town, at least back then, one would be bombarded with authors and illustrators looking for representation.

RVC: What was the biggest surprise? 

SC: The biggest surprise was that I couldn’t sell everything I sent out on submission. I thought I could do poetry, picture books, novels, nonfiction–the sky was the limit! But that wasn’t the case. It took me a couple of years to find my groove and understand where my strengths lay within kidlit.

RVC: Indeed, your agency website says you specialize in “the wonderful world of books for children and teens.” What is it about kidlit that interests you?

SC: I actually began my career selling mostly adult books and eventually became a children’s specialist. I was drawn to the artistic side of children’s books–all that art!–and the many school and library conferences for kids books allowed me not only to travel around the country, but  also to meet teachers and librarians firsthand. It was a great way to learn more about their jobs and their young readers. I really felt part of the process.

I secretly also felt that the people in children’s books were nicer. But it was when I was at Farrar Straus & Giroux over 2 decades ago that I first enjoyed a marketing promotion success which lead me forward in my career: then I did both sales and marketing. FSG then distributed a small press that had the lovely Linnea in Monet’s Garden book–a backlist staple for FSG for years. A big anniversary was coming up and I proposed we do a promotion to increase sales. I don’t remember all the details, but we designed and printed a cardboard easel-​backed cutout figurine of Linnea that bookstores could get for free if they ordered a certain amount of copies of the book. Probably 5–8 copies, I imagine, with maybe a little extra discount. It worked, and sales bloomed for Linnea in Monet’s Garden. That cutout figurine remained in stores for years and years.

RVC: You’ve said that you really enjoy the “beginning of the process,” which I take to mean reading submissions and discovering new talent. What do you find so appealing? 

SC: It’s discovering new talent that excites me a lot, the proverbial diamond in the rough–reading something that is really good, if not wonderful–and realizing there’s something here, that once revised and polished, there may be an audience for the piece down the road once it’s ready for submission.

Since we’re talking about the beginning of the process, I also like bringing ideas to my authors. For example, I suggested that Alice McGinty write The Water Lady, forthcoming from Anne Schwartz Books/​Random House, after seeing a heartbreaking and astonishing news segment about the lack of running water on Navajo reservations. I had read Marcel Marceau’s obituary and learned he had survived the Holocaust–perfect for a picture book biography by Leda Schubert, Monsieur Marceau: Actor Without Words. And author Elisa Boxer took my idea of a picture book bio about Nancy Pelosi and ran with it–this is due with Crown /​ Random House in 2021.

RVC: Those books sound terrific. But let’s talk about the submission process a bit. Pretend “Joe Smith” sent you one and it’s now at the top of your to-​read stack. What are three things you might find in Joe’s manuscript that get you excited?

SC: At the moment, I’m only looking for author/​illustrator projects–that is, text and art from one individual–so let’s use that as an example.

First, I must like and relate to the art. This is entirely subjective and can be frustrating for authors when I reject a submission. Believe me, this happens to me with editors all the time, so I totally get it. Luckily I do like a variety of art styles. I have to love the story, feel there’s something worth telling and that it has value of some sort to the general consumer, but especially to editors and publishers. Is it fresh and maybe unusual? Is it a new take on a classic issue for kids? Is it a perfect blend of story and art? And then, does it have some kind of hook or sales handle that an editor can use to get the project through the acquisition process?

Besides loving the art, of course, here are some more tidbits.

What I loved about Joowon Oh’s Our Favorite Day story was that it was intergenerational: about how a grandfather couldn’t wait for his granddaughter to come for a visit. That Joowon and the characters are Korean added another element–and the dumplings didn’t hurt the story!

Jacob Grant’s Bear books with Bloomsbury are so wonderfully simple and humorous, yet their plots all relate to things that any toddler goes through in life. All those fears and issues!

Sarah Brannen’s two picture books with Philomel, Bear Needs Help and A Perfect Day, have very brief texts, but deliver colorful, beautiful art. Each book has a clever, wry twist, as well.

Julie Fortenberry’s forthcoming Darcy’s First Sleepover (Christy Ottaviano Books) and Pearl goes to Preschool (Candlewick), both offer wonderful art and also little kid issues told in a comforting and very appealing manner.

RVC: Beyond the obvious things—typos, preachiness, and length issues—what are some of the common reasons you say no to a manuscript?

SC: If the art doesn’t appeal to me, then I’ll pass on the project, of course. A lot of the art I pass on feels too amateurish and wouldn’t pass muster with my editors, I’m afraid. But then I look at some art in books from major houses that looks like my four-​year-​old nephew could’ve done it–and I sit back and simply wonder at that!  If a story feels derivative, if it’s too similar to others out there, or ones I’ve seen, then I’ll pass on it. I’m not a big fan of alliterative stories, or of rhymed texts–unless superbly done.

RVC: What’s a typical workday like for you?

SC: This is pre-​pandemic: I’m up early, and already reading manuscripts in bed. One of us walks the dog, and then I’m at my desk at 7:00am eating breakfast and reviewing overnight emails–my foreign rights agency is based in London, so I’m always hopeful some good news might have come in about a book. A finalized deal from Italy, an offer from Poland, interest from the UK about a novel? I delete all the crappy emails that come in…and then it’s on to the rest of the work day stuff.

As I work totally alone (a true sole proprietor!), I don’t have partners, other agents, or an assistant. I do everything here. All day long I’m responding to a variety of emails from clients and editors and other agents, reading queries (up to 10 to 15 a day). I’m following up with authors on their projects, cajoling some of them to write something new, reviewing a picture book text for the 8th time to see if it works, does it flow well, is it as strong as it can be for submission – does it need one more round? If there’s art involved, is the text laid out well and is it readable? Does the character look the same throughout the pdf?

Many times I send the author an email full of notes about their project, and then we hop on the phone for a conversation to make sure we’re both happy and on the same page. I break for lunch for an hour–and I do a lot of reading of manuscripts, especially novels. After lunch it’s maybe walking the dog again and then back to the computer. The afternoon is filled with much of the same, though I may need to run to the post office or the bank. By 4:00pm, I’m slowing down a bit, and by 4:30 until dinner time, I can be found reading manuscripts in the sunroom. No work until bedtime, when you’ll find me reading manuscripts in bed–or a non-​client novel for pure pleasure, if I’m lucky.

RVC: Can we take one of your books as a case study in how the process works? How about Joowon Oh’s 2019 Our Favorite Day, which earned a starred review from School Library Journal and Publishers Weekly?

SC: I met Joowon in August 2016. She’s from Korea and was living in New York when she submitted two pdfs to me. I was very much drawn to her art style, I loved the mixed media and her vibrant colors. I passed on one story, yet I told her the other one–then called The Gifthad potential, but needed work. And it did. The story was about a grandfather waiting for a visit from his granddaughter–totally sweet. She wanted some more revision details from me, which I provided, and we decided then to meet in the city for a coffee. Things went well, and I made her an offer of representation, which she accepted. Then we got to work on the text and story, as well as some things in the art.

Once the pdf was ready to go, the submission process began. Our first submission was an exclusive in November. The editor passed on it, so then I did a multiple submission round in December. And another one in January, and another one in March, which finally generated some interest from Candlewick! But then that editor was leaving and she passed it on to another editor there. The new editor, Kate Fletcher, loved it and eventually made an offer, which we negotiated and accepted.

Kate did a beautiful job working with Joowon on this story–it’s ostensibly the same story, but so much better. The title was changed to Our Favorite Day, and it published in September 2019 to lots of wonderful critical acclaim.

RVC: You’ve been closed to submissions for some time, but you’re open again now (June 2020). What are a few things you’re NOT really looking for in picture books at the moment?

SC: Yes, it’s been a tough several months for my family: we lost an aunt to cancer and I was her primary caretaker–it took up a lot of time, both literally and emotionally, and so I needed to close for new submissions for a while.

RVC: I’m so sorry to hear that, but I’m sure that writers and illustrators seeking representation understand.

SC: I’m open now to author/​illustrator submissions only. I want kid-​friendly, mostly character-​driven stories of any kind. A touch of humor always helps! But, first and foremost, I’m looking for stories that a child would pick up and want read to them (again and again)–not one where the appeal is more for the adult.

I’m also open to fun and or unusual nonfiction in picture books, too. If it has an anniversary tie-​in of any type, even better.

RVC: Just to be clear, you’re NOT looking for writers unless they also do their own art.

SC: That’s right. I’m not open to text-​only projects. Sorry, but I have enough clients writing those.

RVC: Now, it’s time for the long-​awaited, always-​appreciated, rarely equaled OPB SPEED ROUND! Zoomy questions and zippy answers, please. Ready?

SC: Let’s do it!

RVC: Best bakery in New York City?

SC: We love Breads Bakery down near Union Square, although there are other locations. You must try their chocolate babka!

RVC: If The Chudney Agency were ice cream, what flavor would it be?

SC: Italian pistachio gelato.

RVC: Your dream picture book project?

SC: Gosh, there are so many. Hello Lighthouse by Sophie Blackall. Martin Rising: Requiem for a King by Andrea Davis and Brian Pinkney. There are too many, so I’ll stop here.

RVC: Favorite picture book from childhood?

SC: Bread and Jam for Francis.

RVC: Favorite line from a Chudney-​repped picture book?

SC: “I don’t need pants to party” from Jacob Grant’s forthcoming book, No Pants!, Viking, 2021

RVC: Way to end strong, Steven. Thanks so much!

Educational Activities: Bo the Brave, by Bethan Woollvin

Bo the Brave
Author: Bethan Woollvin
Illustrator: Bethan Woollvin
Peachtree Publishing
1 April 2020
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “A feisty little girl learns who the real monsters are in this brilliantly funny medieval adventure.

Once, there lived a little girl called Bo. Bo wanted to be just like her brothers and capture a fearsome monster. Bo is small, too small to catch a monster–or so her brothers say. But Bo isn’t one to take no for an answer, so she sets off on a quest to catch a monster of her own. Can she defeat the furious griffin, conquer the hideous kraken, and triumph over the monstrous dragon? Or has Bo got the wrong idea who the real monsters are?

Author-​illustrator Bethan Woollvin, the creator of the New York Times Best Illustrated Little Red, employs her signature style in this original fairy tale with a clever twist. Readers are sure to fall in love with Woollvin’s newest vibrant and sassy protagonist.”


Need some reviews of Bo the Brave?


Educational Activities inspired by Bethan Woollvin’s Bo the Brave:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • Does this seem like our world, or is it about a different time and place?
    • What type of character do you think Bo is?
    • What do you think of when you’re told a character is “brave”?
    • Who/​what do you see sneaking about on the back cover?
    • If you could ask the author any question before you read the book, what would it be?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the book: 
    • Which of the three creatures that Bo encounters on her adventure do you like the most?
    • What does the story teach us about who/​what monsters are?
    • How do you think Bo’s relationship with her brothers will change after this story?
    • At the end of this story, we learn that Bo and her brothers “loved roaming the land and learning about all the amazing she came across.” What type of creature do you think they met next?
    • From time to time, this story rhymed. Were they are moments that really stood out for that reason?
    • What other story does Bo the Brave remind you of?
  • WritingBo the Brave has three monsters in it: a griffin, a kraken, and a dragon. Write up your own list of other monsters that Bo might’ve encountered. Consider using the alphabet to guide your choices, such as “B is for Bigfoot” or “N is Nine Naughty Penguins!” Be as scary or silly as you choose! 
    • Feel free to create illustrations if you want.
    • Perhaps you might want to share your results with a sibling or adult?
  • Activities–This climax of this story has a lot to do with a dragon, so let’s celebrate dragons together. With an adult’s help, try the following dragon-​themed crafts: 
    • Dragon Corner Bookmark–Easy to make and useful, too. They’re so cute!
    • Dragon Mask–What better way to have fun with dragons than to become one? With this printable and a little decorating, you’ve got all you need for some dragontastic fun!
    • Make a Dragon Snack–It’s rare to have fully edible crafts in these Educational Activities, but this one sure is! Chocolate chips, raisins, a cashew, and a pear. Yum!
    • Paper Plate Dragon–It’s amazing how a single paper plate can transform into such a cool puppet.
    • Paper Puppet Dragon–Yes, another dragon puppet of sorts, but the results here are far different the paper plate version. What’s terrific is how this one scales up or down in terms of difficulty (for older or younger kids).
  • Further Reading–In addition to being about dragons (and other “monsters,”) this book is about bravery. Which of these other picture books about bravery have you read? (Click on the book cover for more information on any of these titles!)

Author Interview: Dev Petty

This month’s author interview is with Dev Petty, a former Visual Effects artist who “sat in a terribly dark room for ten years working as a texture painter” for films like The Matrix. Don’t read that the wrong way—she really liked it! But after having daughters, she discovered her passion and skill for writing, and things worked out for Dev there, too.

We’ll cover a lot more about her writing career below, but to prepare us for that, here are seven fun Dev facts:

  • Married her high school sweetheart.
  • Was on the Bay Bridge in the ’89 earthquake.
  • Loves Cheezits.
  • Great at word jumbles.
  • Wicked good at making sandwiches.
  • Swears a lot.
  • Practicing Jew but devoutly Californian.

Here’s a bonus eighth thing about Dev–she’s got a new book out, The Bear Must Go On, and it looks tremendously fun.

Plus, here are some URLs to learn a bit more about Dev and all that she does in the world of picture books:

https://www.devpetty.com/​

https://nerdybookclub.wordpress.com/tag/dev-petty/

https://twitter.com/devpetty

With that, let’s get right to the Qs and As here!


RVC: One thing that most text-​only picture writers lament is not being able to create the art for their own books. You painted well enough to work for Hollywood. So…why aren’t you doing your own art to go with your picture book manuscripts?

DP:  Yes, I was a good painter. I had a knack for color and composition and texture and was good with all the technology to make it sing. I teach art sometimes, and I make art all the time. BUT…being artistic and being able to tell a story with my art are different things. I don’t have a particular point of view. I know what I like, but that doesn’t mean I have a style and certainly no sense of character design, movement, etc. Honestly, I really like the writing part–I grew up in Berkeley in the 70s. I’m by nature pretty weird and have a lot of ideas…the writing suits me fine. Doing the art would feel sort of like a…job.

RVC: I’ll bet the Hollywood experiences still proved useful in other ways.

DP: Being in film does, for sure, inform how I tell a story. In film, you have to tell a story front to back–which is to say if someone is noticing some mistake in the background when something important is up front, you’ve failed as a storyteller. That helps me be economical with words and good at discerning what thread I want to pull on in a story.

Film also taught me to have a terribly thick skin.

RVC: What kind of writing training did you undertake when making the shift from creating art to writing picture books?

DP: I actually wasn’t much of a writer and started by taking a personal essay class, which–I ought to tell you–is the cheapest therapy you’ll ever have. I enjoyed writing but didn’t know that I wanted to write picture books until I just wrote one for fun and totally loved it. After that, I just read a lot of blog posts and a gazillion picture books and just wrote, wrote, wrote. I’m not too much for researching or classes or conferences. I just dove in and figured it out.

RVC: You’ve got a thing for animal characters, it seems. Why do they appeal to you as a storymaker?

DP: Well, yeah. I do write books with humans, just none have been picked up as yet. But I like to write about animals–they come with some intrinsic qualities that create good material. So I’m able to inject a lot into their personalities because there are already certain elements there. But I’m not one to just take a human-​like character and decide it’s a walrus for the fun of it.

RVC: Mike Boldt—the illustrator of the Frog books—did an interview where he talked about I Don’t Want to Go to Sleep. Regarding the character of Frog, Mike said that he can “hear his voice and see his expressions just by reading the manuscript.” How do you go about creating an effective voice? What specific steps/​techniques are you using?

DP: Mike is the best–just have to get that out there!

RVC: I quite agree! (I hope he sees this and wants do his own OPB interview down the road.)

DP: Frog is fun to write because he’s sort of droll and dry but still curious and engaged in the world around him. Frog has a lot of questions. I’m not sure I take any specific steps–I can just sort of hear his voice, which is very much how I write in any case. I hear a book, at least the opening of a book, in my head before I ever put pen to paper. I don’t think I could write a narrative book with Frog. He’s all dialogue for me.

RVC: I’m a fan of Claymation, so obviously I dug your 2017 book, Claymates. What’s the story behind that book?

DP: A lot of wine.

Kidding!

Well, the extraordinary Lauren Eldridge and I were sort of Twitter friends and talked about working together. She would make these funny clay characters and I thought they were really hilarious. I didn’t want to take something normal, like a regular story, and have her illustrate it in clay. I wanted a story that was ABOUT the fact they were clay, where your character could be anything at any time. That’s so open and abstract and kind of 70s trippy and it all just came out at once–the ideas at least.

I pitched her the idea and she liked it! We did a full photographic dummy to try to sell it because, honestly, how could you pitch that story and not sound like a lunatic?! What’s funny is that in the same way the balls of clay become friends through experimentation, play, being silly–so did we. She’s one of my best friends in the world. Art brings the strangest bedfellows together.

RVC: You’ve talked before about the challenge of finding each story’s thread. Would you explain that concept by way via the creation of one of your books?

DP:  Well, Claymates is actually a great example. On the one hand, it’s just some goofball book about some balls of clay who make a mess of themselves. But in a bigger way, the thread of Claymates is about how no matter how many and what sort of hands (parents, teachers, friends) are trying to mold and shape us at any given time, ultimately we have an insatiable need to evolve on our own, experiment, make mistakes, play. I try to remember this as a parent–not to tinker too much in who my kids will become, they have to shape themselves. As long as they’re happy and good people, I don’t care what they end up doing.

RVC: In a 2014 guest post on Tara Lazar’s fine blog, you recommend writers stop writing. Care to give us an explanation on that surprising idea?

DP: Well, I think it’s really easy to go too quickly to writing once you have an idea. You get this lightbulb and want to RUN to start writing. But I’ve found I do much better when I just let things percolate a while, otherwise I just end up shuffling words about on the page instead of digging a little deeper, trying things, finding the thread.

RVC: While OPB interviews agents, we don’t always talk about the HOWS and WHYS of having/​getting one. You’re with Jennifer Rofé at the Andrea Brown Literary Agency, right? How did you land that relationship, and what has it done for your career?

DP: Jen is actually my third agent (loooooonnnnnng story) and I’m so grateful I reached out to her when I was again looking. She’s Mike Boldt’s agent too, so I already knew she was awesome. Jen pushes me, sometimes really hard, to do my best work. She’s editorial, honest, and whipsmart. I rarely feel intimidated by anyone but if I were to, it might be her. Not because she’s mean, because she’s just really sharp, engaged, and articulate. When we talk I write “don’t babble” on my hands because she is so on point with everything and I never want to look back and think, “Darn, Dev, you babbled!”

But she’s also kind and has an uncanny sense of the industry and how to balance life and writing. She’s just a fantastic person and I’m very lucky.

RVC: If you could time-​travel back to that first year of your writing apprenticeship, what would you tell yourself to ease the process? What do you know now that you wish you knew then?

DP: I suppose that it’s just a really slow process, even if you start out with a popular book like I did. It takes time to build this career and you don’t want to rush it just to sell books. I learned most of that from Jen, for what it’s worth.

RVC: Alright, it’s time to transition to the always-​fun, never-​equaled, ever-​exciting SPEED ROUND! Are you ready?

DP: Word.

RVC: The Carlton Dance, the Macarena, or the Cha Cha Slide. Which are we most likely to catch you performing? 

DP: The Macarena. (I don’t even know what the other two are, but I still know without doubt the answer is the Macarena!)

RVC: Most underappreciated film in The Matrix series?

DP: The first one. Everyone loves it and appreciates it and knows it’s the best and it still couldn’t be overappreciated because it’s really original and thoughtful and smart, so it’s probably underappreciated.

RVC: If picture books were ice cream flavors, what flavor would your Frog series be?

DP: Bubblegum. It’s hard to know what the underlying flavor is and there’s weird chewy bits inside for some reason that you pick out and let stain and stick to your napkin and then eat all at once for like five minutes before spitting it out.

RVC: What’s something about your writing process that might surprise people?

DP: I tend to write the opening a bunch of different ways before committing. Once I find one I like, I let that guide the rest of the writing. I throw a LOT away but save everything in case I did something great.

RVC: “The last truly GREAT picture book I read was __________.”

DP: Oooh. I’m really picky actually. In a way that probably doesn’t serve me well.  Sam & Dave Dig a Hole is up there, for sure. It’s dead smart.

RVC: The one-​sentence message you hope all of your picture books deliver?

DP: Ask questions.

RVC: Thanks so much, Dev!

DP: The pleasure is mine! Thank you!

Picture Book Review: Fly, Firefly! by Shana Keller

Fly, Firefly!
Author: Shana Keller
Illustrator: Ramona Kaulitzki
Sleeping Bear Press
1 March 2020
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (#1 Firefly Fan at Only Picture Books) and Florida-​based freelance artist Austin McKinley.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

Fly, Firefly! tells the story of what happens to a single firefly when “a wind current carried him out to see the sea.” While out there, he sees winking lights beneath the water–other fireflies, perhaps? So he dives into the water and can’t get out. He’s rescued by “my niece and I” who explain that the underwater fireflies were in fact the glow of marine plankton–“bioluminescence swirling and twirling through the great sea!” The eponymous firefly is then released on land where he finds his fellow fireflies, and all is well again.

The smoothness and sense of most of the rhymes make lines such as “He dove and splashed through the wet glass, but under the surface, air did not last” stand out. Another line that gives this reviewer pause is “The sea pushed and tugged while I scooped up our bug.” While the second part of the Back Matter does an effective job of offering STEM-​style information on fireflies (a.k.a. lightning bugs)–including pointing out that they’re beetles, not flies–it doesn’t say that they aren’t bugs either (a fact, despite what this line claims). Considering that this book does have a science fact focus–and given the popularity of the term “lightning bugs”–this distinction seems useful to make at some point. Ultimately, the reason the word “bug” is there seems clear–to fit the rhyme, not the science.

Taken as a whole, the text works, though the overall story isn’t a story so much as an anecdote since it’s unclear whether the main character could/​should be the firefly (witness the title, and how it’s the first character we see on page one and in the last spread), the first-​person speaker (who’s an older character), or the niece, Marjie (who rescues the firefly and explains bioluminescence to it in Dr. Doolittle fashion that belies her very young age).

What gives away the real goal of the book is the first page of the Back Matter–the author read a letter that Silent Spring author and environmentalist Rachel Carson wrote to a friend about her own memorable encounter with a firefly half a century ago. An excerpt of that letter shows that Rachel herself considered writing a children’s book about the experience, though she clearly never did such a thing. Some readers might find it gratifying that Shana Keller helped fulfill Rachel’s impulse here with Fly, Firefly!.

The other selling points of this book are the really fine art (see what Austin says below!) and the second half of the Back Matter that gets into the science and biology of fireflies. It’s a plus that the author has so much information on Rachel , too, because kids need to know about her impactful life and work, without a doubt. If Shana Keller opts to write a nonfiction book about Rachel Carson (or the worldwide impact of Silent Spring) with the quality she used in her picture book biography, Ticktock Banneker’s Clock, OPB will be eager to see it.

If you’re a firefly fan or you just love good picture book art, Fly, Firefly! is likely to brighten up your nights.

3.5 out of 5 pencils

Austin’s Review of the Illustrations–

German Illustrator Ramona Kaulitzki’s sumptuous illustrations are so kinetic you can practically hear them, but nevertheless remain calming and peaceful. Here she explores the entire spectrum from the warm glow of the firefly’s body, through a masterful rendering of magic-​hour twilight, to the swirling blues and greens of glowing plankton churning in the waves, all in tints pure and moody without being brooding.

The forest at dusk comes alive. The panoply of sea life she depicts with exquisite sensitivity, whereas the human and titular firefly characters she handles with appealing whimsy.

Her choice of perspectives is also fascinating. We soar through the air, plunge into the waves, and plod along the beach as the sparkling stars hang over the day’s last glow. She skillfully captures mood and emotion—it’s a truly magical, evocative experience that perfectly portrays the parallels of life-​generated lights that created such an impression on biologist Rachel Carlson, and subsequently author Shana Keller.

A look through Ramona’s portfolio will reveal a flair for stylizing the natural world in a sophisticated but approachable way both dynamic and heartwarming without ever becoming saccharine. Her work is digital, but has a very organic, textural, handmade quality that reminds one of mid-​century children’s illustration, like a next-​generation Alain Grée or J.P. Miller. Her staging, however, is far more clever and interesting, her cartooning more fine-​tuned, her palette more refined.

It’s a fine line to walk, but she dances along it expertly in Fly, Firefly!

5 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
He is currently illustrating Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.