Editor Interview: Allison Cohen (Running Press Kids)

Welcome to Allison Cohen, who is the subject of this month’s Industry Insider interview at OPB. Since 2018, she’s been an editor at Running Press Kids (an imprint of Hachette Book Group), but for eight years prior to that, she served as a literary agent at The Gersh Agency. Before that, she worked almost two years as an assistant at a different literary agency (The Gernert Company).

Allison got herself on my radar via being so prominent on the recent Dealmakers List at Publishers Marketplace—anyone making as many deals as she’s making has my attention for sure!

Allison keeps a pretty low online profile, so instead of me making things up or sharing summer internship information (for example, she worked at Gemstar/​TV Guide for 5 months a long, long time ago), let’s jump ahead to the interview to see what we can discover together!


RVC: Congratulations on having the second-​smallest digital footprint of anyone I’ve interviewed here. Is that on purpose or did it just happen that way?

AC: Hahaha! I wear that as a badge of honor. To be honest, I have a love-​hate relationship with social media. I think it can be a wonderful place to connect and support a shared love of all things—books, music, food, travel, (insert personal interests here), but a few years ago, I realized I needed to take myself offline to protect my mental health. It can be a very toxic place, too, and so I’ve been happy to (mostly) let it go.

RVC: I hear you there! Other than my blog, I stay pretty low-​key, as well. Now, let’s go back to the start of things for you. Where’d you grow up?

AC: Just outside northeast Philly.

RVC: Describe the path that led from there to where you are now, working in NYC as an editor for a kidlit imprint at one of the Big 5 publishers.

AC: I come from a long line of educators (both my parents were teachers, as was my sister, aunts/​uncles, etc.), and so I always assumed I would be a high school English teacher when I grew up. In college, I realized my interests extended beyond teaching, and I thought about other opportunities I could pursue as an English Lit major. I thought about what I loved most (spoiler alert: books/​reading), and had a moment where I was like, hmm…maybe I do the “teaching thing” later in life and find something in the immediate that lets me surround myself with books for a few years before I change gears. I didn’t really know where to start, so I applied to a job at TV Guide, hoping to work with their magazine (dating myself here). Let’s just say it wasn’t exactly what I’d imagined it would be.

Skip ahead to when an amazing friend of mine was telling me about her job in sales at Random House and how she thought I should consider moving to NYC and getting a job in “real” publishing. She sold me. My first job at a Big 5 was as the assistant to Madeline McIntosh when she led the audio group. She was an incredible mentor and really helped me figure out what I wanted to do. We were talking over lunch one day, and I started talking about all these editors I admired and how I wanted to be like them. She asked me what, specifically, I liked about what these editors did. After I told her, she casually asked if I’d ever thought about being an agent. I hadn’t. At the time, I thought of agents in the abstract. They were the people who sent publishers submissions, and then we took it from there. She set up some informal meetings for me to talk with agent friends she knew so I could hear more about their day-​to-​day, and I was hooked. I wanted to be the person on the very front lines. Finding the author, helping them shape their work, finding them a home with a publisher, championing them every step of the way, having these lifelong connections.

So, when the opportunity presented itself, I took a job as an assistant to two agents. I learned a lot about what really goes into creating a book—what it takes to find and grow authors, sell books, etc. I eventually wound up as Phyllis Wender’s assistant at Gersh. I’ve never met anyone like Phyllis. Her career path is incredible. There’s nothing she hasn’t done. She is also one of the most passionate, dedicated, generous, loving people I’ve ever met. To this day, she is an unbelievable mentor. She helped me build my list and become an agent in my own right. I am forever indebted to her and could write a book about all she’s taught me—personally and professionally. After eight years at Gersh, however, an opportunity presented itself and…well, RP Kids became my home!

RVC: All the time, I see editors moving into the field of agenting. You did that, but then you boomeranged back to editing. That’s really quite rare.

AC: I loved being an agent. I loved working with writers across genres—children’s and adult, fiction and non-​fiction, etc. And the relationships I built with my authors were unbelievably special. But the 247 hustle was a lot. You’re not just an agent—you’re an editor, an accountant, a lawyer, a therapist, etc. I often found myself pulled away from some of what I loved best about the job—working with authors on developing their manuscripts. Don’t get me wrong, being an editor requires hustle—nights and weekends reading and editing—but it’s a different kind. I had been talking to an editor friend of mine about life and maybe making a change but not really knowing what that change was.

That same week, I saw the opening at Running Press Kids. It felt like the universe was sending me a sign. I REALLY struggled with leaving behind my authors, but I knew the relationships with the ones who really mattered would continue (they have), and I told myself that if the whole editing “thing” didn’t work out, I could always come back to agenting. I knew how to do it. I loved it. I could come back.

I started at Running Press and I loved it. Present tense. I love it. I love the people. The entire team—we’re a family. I love our authors. I love our list. It’s relit a creative fire I didn’t realize I’d been missing. Four years later, I can’t imagine doing anything else.

RVC: For those that don’t know Running Press Kids that well, say a few words about what makes it different than other imprints and presses.

AC: We are small but mighty. And we approach every book as a collaboration. We trust each other and really value opinions on everything from cover to copy. And I think the collective passion of our team is why our books look the way they do and find the readers they do. Because we’re all working towards the same goal of instilling a lifelong love of reading into the readers who find our books.

RVC: What was the first picture book you acquired?

AC: Alpaca Pati’s Fancy Fleece by Tracey Kyle.

RVC: What was the best lesson that came out of that book?

AC: It was a crash course in how to manage all the moving parts of producing a picture book. From finding an illustrator to managing schedules of deliverables. I learned just how collaborative the process is—not just between the author and illustrator, but across all the different departments—editorial, design, managing ed, production, marketing/​publicity, sales. There is SO much that goes into making these books happen. They don’t just appear on shelves at stores. Ha!

RVC: It seems like you have a particular interest in nonfiction picture books. Is that fair?

AC: Ooh, I don’t know…maybe in the beginning? I love books that teach kids about the world without being overly didactic. At RPK, we pride ourselves on publishing beautiful books that educate while they entertain. That said, several of my more recent acquisitions have been fiction, and it’s because I need that balance. Fiction offers opportunities to celebrate life and nature and can teach kids how to be better people, all through the power of story.

RVC: Let’s help out those writers and agents who read OPB. What kinds of things are you looking for?

AC: Hmm…this is hard because sometimes I don’t realize I’m looking for something until it hits my desk. That is such a non-​answer, I know. I will say that I have been having a lot of fun with our mystical/​magical books. With picture books I take on, I’m mostly looking for projects in the mindfulness, conservation/​nature, and social justice space.

RVC: What kinds of things are you NOT looking for?

AC: Rhyming picture books! Okay, to be fair, there is always an exception to this. BUT it often seems writers think picture books have to be written in rhyme, and then they try to force this rhyme scheme that doesn’t feel natural and the book falls apart a little.

On a more general note, I’m not looking for sci-​fi/​fantasy or chapter books.

RVC: I’m curious about what you do in a day-​to-​day work sense.

AC: Day-to-day…it really depends on what kinds of meetings we have. First thing, every morning, I check my email to make sure there aren’t any “fires” that developed overnight. Then I look at the day and block out times to deal with all the things. I used to try and get to every email in real-​time, but it’s a losing battle. So, now I just create blocks on the calendar to tend to everything. I work on pitches/​proposals for our internal editorial meetings (including comp research). I run P&Ls for potential acquisitions. I review passes and proofs of our books in production, style manuscripts for transmittal, work on cover copy, draft fact sheets for sales/​marketing. This all happens in between various meetings—cover meetings (love reviewing covers of our books), illustrator meetings (reviewing portfolios for potential projects), editorial meetings, calls with agents, editorial calls with authors, etc.

Mind you, I try to check my email every half hour or hour, depending on what the day is like. The hardest part, honestly, is just trying to keep things moving and being able to pivot when something major needs to be addressed.

RVC: What’s the most common misconception that people have about editors?

AC: That we spend our days reading and editing manuscripts. If only! The days are spent drafting copy, running P&Ls, reviewing proofs, preparing titles for launch and sales conference. Pretending I don’t have 221 emails in my inbox…(see above answer—hahaha!)

RVC: If you had to summarize the most important thing you’ve learned about being an editor, what would it be?

AC: To be flexible. Sometimes, you have to reimagine a book—sometimes it’s the trim size or page count. Sometimes it’s the art because an illustrator you wanted isn’t available. Sometimes a book’s on-​sale date has to move out—it can be a month or two, or sometimes it’s to a different season. There are a multitude of reasons things change over the course of a book’s production, and much is out of your control, so you just have to roll with it. Remind yourself it’s all part of the process of making sure the book is the best version of itself.  

RVC: What’s one thing that a lot of people just don’t quite understand about picture books?

AC: There is SO much that has to come together to make a book. That’s why schedules can be so long. It takes a lot to create synergy between the text and illustrations—you have the manuscript, then you find the right illustrator, then you get the sketches (almost always adjustments are made), then you see the color art (more adjustments are made). You’re getting together materials to share with sales so they can sell in to their accounts. You’re building marketing/​publicity plans to launch the book into the world. All this is happening while the managing ed and production teams are doing their best to make sure the books are printed, shipped, etc. There are so many hands that touch a book. It takes time. It’s a lot of work, but then you get the advance copy, hold it in your hands and think, THIS IS WHY. It is incredible when everything works out.

RVC: Since COVID has clearly affected all of us, I’m making an extra effort to ask a mental health question in every interview now. Here’s yours: what do you do to de-stress?

AC: I go outside. I feel so much better surrounded by nature. I go for runs or hikes. I just need to get out and get moving.

RVC: And here’s a follow-​up mental health question. What do you do to defeat negativity—internally or from the outside world?

AC: That’s a great question. It’s something I’m really working on, so I’m not sure I have an answer. I will say I have some really amazing friends and family that are always at the ready to offer support and keep me in check. So, when I’m really feeling down about something, I just reach out to the people I love and know they will come back with either a virtual hug or send a ridiculous meme to distract me.

Sounds cheesy, but it’s the best I can think of for now.

RVC: One last question for this part of the interview. What forthcoming projects do you want to brag about?

AC: There are so many!! Honestly, I look at our list and just think, WOW, we make beautiful books that demand conversation (and attention). Natasha Deen was the very first author I worked with at RP Kids, and her next book with us, The Signs and Wonders of Tuna Rashad (YA fiction) pubs this summer. The second book from Lil Miss Hot Mess, If You’re a Drag Queen and You Know It, comes out this summer. I didn’t work on this, but it’s just such a fun book, and the cover is incredible—a true feast for the eyes!

We have an awesome Junior Handbook series, and the third book is publishing this Fall—The Junior Tarot Reader’s Handbook. In a similar “mystical” vein, we have Astrology for Black Girls this summer. We have two picture books that reteam the author/​illustrator, that are so much fun—Peculiar Primates and Battle of the Brains coming this Fall.

I could seriously go on and on. Is there room to brag about all of our books? Because that’s how I feel about our list.

RVC: Alrighty, Allison. It’s time for the Big Moment. It’s…THE LIGHTNING ROUND! The point values are quintupled, and the stakes have never been higher. We’ve got the countdown clock ready because we’re looking to handle six questions and answers in sixty seconds. Are you ready?

AC: [Stretches arms. Closes eyes and takes a deep breath…] 

RVC: If you could only have one app on your phone, it’d be…

AC: My music app. I LOVE music and have all sorts of playlists depending on my mood or what I’m doing—editing, running, cooking, etc. Wait, is that considered an app? If not, then I guess my Notes app because I use it all the time when I have an idea for a book or need to create lists or to-​dos. My brain is so overloaded that I can’t remember anything without writing it down.

RVC: Would you rather have a personal chef, a personal trainer, or a maid?

AC: Ryan! Oh, gosh…ummm…personal chef? I actually find cleaning therapeutic. I do like cooking, but I don’t always have the time or resources. But, man, a personal trainer would be pretty cool, too.

Chef. I’m going to stick with personal chef! Final answer!

RVC: If someone narrated your life, who would you want to be the narrator?

AC: Jennifer Garner. She’s the first person that popped into my head. I don’t know why. Maybe because she’s amazing?

RVC: Five words (or fewer!) that come to mind when someone says “Art Notes.”

AC: Leave room for creative license! (to be clear, for the illustrator’s creative license)

RVC: What was the One That Got Away?

AC: Oof. You would think it would get easier each time, but there are a few that have stuck with me even years later. I try to console myself with the knowledge that at least the book will find its way into the hands of readers, and I’ll be able to add a copy to my personal bookshelf.

RVC: Your favorite quote about picture books (or writing, or editing—I can adjust to whatever you’ve got)

AC: It’s not a quote, but I was gifted the book Dear Genius: The Letters of Ursula Nordstrom, and it is one of the best gifts I’ve ever been given. I changed a lot about the way I approach editing after reading her letters. And I think anyone who loves publishing and books should read it. There is so much wonderful history (and humanity) in this book, and I have found a lot of inspiration in how I approach my work from it. If you really need a quote, though, on my wall is a quote from Ernest Hemingway: There is no friend as loyal as a book. 😉

RVC: Thanks so much, Allison!

AC: THANK YOU!!!

Educational Activities: Climb On! by Baptiste Paul

Climb On!
Authors: Baptiste Paul
Illustrator: Jacqueline Alcántara
8 March 2022
NorthSouth Books
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “When a young child reminds her dad about the hike they planned, her father is hesitant —To the tippy top? It’s a great day to watch futbol (soccer). But as the two climb on, her enthusiasm is contagious. Filled with setbacks, surprises, and stunning views, this warm and humorous story highlights in vivid colors the bonding power of a shared experience. A list of creatures at the end prompts a second look for keen-​eyed readers to make discoveries of their own.

Baptiste Paul and Jacqueline Alcántara (co-​creators of The Field) have teamed up again! Baptiste’s humorous and tender text, with a sprinkling of Creole words straight from the Pitons, and Jacqueline Alcántara’s vibrant and evocative illustrations capture the wonder and emotions experienced on the trail and the special relationship between a parent and a child.”


Need some reviews of Climb On!?

As a bonus, please enjoy this short interview about the book with author Baptiste Paul.


Educational Activities inspired by Baptiste Paul’s Climb On!:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • Where and when do you think this story takes place?
    • What do you think this story will be about?
    • What is the child doing on the front cover?
    • What emotion is the child on the cover feeling?
    • Who is the other person behind that child?
    • From looking at this cover, what other books does this remind you of?
    • What do the images on the back cover make you think about?
    • How do you think this story will end?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • What did you think would happen with the child wanted to got for a walk and Daddy said it was a “great day for watching futbol”?
    • If you were going on a long hike, would you have taken anything beyond what they put in their backpacks?
    • How easy was it to figure out what the Creole words meant? (They were always in italics.)
    • What creatures were causing trouble when you read “Buzz, buzz, buzz. Smack, smack, smack!”? Would you have turned back then?
    • What other animals and creatures did you see in this story?
    • What would you have done if you got to the top of the summit and realized you’d forgotten a camera? What did you think of their solution?
  • Writing–Think about a time you took a walk with a loved one. Or, if you prefer, imagine a walk you might one day take with a friend or family member. Write that story. Think about scenery, weather, plants, animals, and nature. If you want, create accompanying pictures with crayons, colored pencils, or markers. Stories are best when shared, so consider sharing yours with a friend or family member.
  • Planning–It’s always a good idea to plan before starting any journey. Answer the following about a future hike:
    • I’d like to hike to/​at _______________.
    • Someone I’d like to hike with me is _______________.
    • The three most important things to bring with me on the hike are _​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​, _​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​_​, and _____________.
    • Something I expect to see on my hike is _____________.
    • The best part about hiking is  _____________.
  • Activities–There are a lot of things to do while taking a hike. Here are a few of our favorites: 
  • Further Reading–Enjoy more picture books about taking a hike. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

Author Interview: Toni Buzzeo

This month’s Author Interview is with Toni Buzzeo, a New York Times bestselling picture book author. Welcome, Toni!

Toni is a prolific children’s author, having published twenty-​nine children’s books and eleven more for librarians and teachers. Her works include fiction and nonfiction picture books with many characters and topics. Toni got her love of reading from her mother and grandmother and has passed it along to others through her books, which have earned many awards, including a 2013 Caldecott Honor for One Cool Friend. The former elementary school librarian and high school and college writing teacher uses her experiences in creating her stories and when speaking with children at schools and libraries. Her next book, Pa, Me, and Our Sidewalk Pantry, is scheduled for a spring 2023 release.

And just to let us all get to know Toni better, here’s some additional information about her:

  • Her last name is pronounced just as it’s spelled: Buzz (like a bee) followed by a long E and a long O. Buzz-​e‑o!
  • She writes her books in a small writing cottage behind her Massachusetts home.
  • During the snowy months, she migrates to sunny Sarasota, Florida.
  • She has two wonderful grandchildren.
  • She worked as a library clerk to pay for night classes, earning bachelor’s and master’s degrees in English.
  • While working as a children’s librarian, she went back to school and earned a second master’s degree in library and information science.
  • She worked as a school librarian for 16 years…in case you haven’t noticed, Toni loves school!

So let’s share some links, get right to the interview, and learn more!


JW: Speaking of your love of school, we first met when you visited my college Writing Picture Books class. You gave an excellent talk! It’s great to catch up with you again. 

TB: Thanks. I loved that event.

JW: When you were between the ages of ten and thirteen, three younger siblings came into your life. How did reading books to them influence your path into the world of picture books?

TB: I’d always been a reader. Both my mother and grandmother were big readers, and they took me to the main library, which is all we had in my town (Dearborn, MI) when I was young. When I was eight and a half, the town built a branch library close to my house. As I had some independence, I could easily walk to the library and get my books by the time I was ten. Lucky for my mother, who was soon saddled with many young ones–she could send me along to get her books, too. I’d bring home a bag of my books and a bag of her books. I had, by then, graduated from picture books and was reading a lot of middle-​grade novels, but what happened, with having the little ones, was that I was necessarily drawn back into the picture books at a time when I wouldn’t have been if I didn’t live with three very young children.

In addition to living with those kids, who I read to constantly, I also did a lot of babysitting. I lived on a street that had 90 houses, and almost all of those houses had children in them. I had lots and lots of babysitting gigs and so many opportunities to read picture books that most people my age wouldn’t have had.

JW: How did being an elementary school librarian for 16 years help you gather ideas for your picture books?

TB: Oh, wow. Going from being a college writing instructor to a school librarian, especially an elementary school librarian, was a huge transition. Suddenly, I was working every day, all day long with children’s books. I was surrounded by them, buying them for my collection, and reading them to my students. I was also reviewing them, as I belonged to a very strong children’s book review group.

The first step for me in writing for children was opening my eyes to the fact that as a writer myself, having written for professional publications in librarianship and for community newsletters, I could take my writing talents and apply them to writing picture books. Somehow, that just hadn’t occurred to me before. In terms of inspiration, ultimately during the time I was working as a librarian, I published eight books with Upstart Books that are all based in libraries, including the four books in the Mrs. Skorupski series. Of my trade picture books, only one is set in a library—a public library. That’s No T. Rex in the Library.

JW: For someone new in the industry with no students to teach or kids at home, what would be the best way to understand what kids want to read?

TB: There are two kinds of people you need to know. The first is an excellent children’s bookseller. Even if you have a bookstore close to you, go out of your way to find a bookstore with a dedicated children’s bookseller, then talk to them. Booksellers can point you not only to what’s excellent on their shelves but also to what kids are drawn to.

The other person, which you know I’m going to say, is an excellent children’s librarian. You and I attended a workshop the other day, in which the valuable suggestion was made to read, read, read a lot of what you want to write. But I added in the chat that it’s important to read a lot of what you want to write, but make sure it’s current. So, if you’re writing, for instance, middle-​grade fiction, reading Harriet the Spy is not going to help you very much with today’s audience.

JW: I remember your comment to that effect.

TB: You want to be reading what’s very much in front of children right now, what’s being sold. You want your manuscript to be attractive to today’s publishers and want your writing to be attractive to today’s children. I was just talking with my critique group about this. I have a five-​year-​old granddaughter, and she likes to listen to children’s novels. We started with Ramona Quimby, which is timeless. It’s been interesting to see that she became very attached to Ramona and Ramona’s circumstances. When I’ve tried to read other older middle-​grade books to her, she quickly loses interest. I think what Beverly Cleary knew in her Ramona books that is echoed in the Clementine books by Sara Pennypacker is that kids don’t care about a lot of rumination or setting description. They want action, and they want a character that’s lively and quick. So, I would caution new writers to ensure that what they’re reading as mentor texts captures these two essential aspects of story.

JW: You mention that educators should know and understand developmental ages and stages. As a picture book writer, could you please explain the benefits of understanding these? 

TB: That’s a tricky question. You must understand the primary concerns for the age group you are writing for. I publish both board books intended for two to five-​year-​olds and picture books intended for four to eight-​year-​olds, and next year I’m publishing my first middle-​grade novel. I must keep solidly in mind what the emotional concerns are of the age, what the real-​world interests are of the age that I’m writing for, and what the ability is of the reader to infer. In a board book, you don’t leave much room for inference because little ones can’t do much inferring. In a picture book intended for a slightly older picture book audience, you can write just as you might in middle-​grade novels. But for the youngest picture book readers, those three and four-​year-​olds, you’ve got very spare text, and you want what you’re writing about to match their concerns.

JW: What’s the best way of gaining this knowledge?

TB: I’d suggest that you spend dedicated time with young children. But what if you’re a college student, or what if you’re a young professional, and you don’t have children readily available to you? Carve out time to spend with either a preschool or elementary class, or find other young adults who have children in their lives that you can talk to. But even more importantly, find children that you can read to. It’s so important to observe how children are reacting to what they’re hearing in terms of helping you to do your best job in writing for the age.

JW: A few of your nonfiction picture books, those in your WHOSE? series involve tools, vehicles, and transportation. I love how this series is board books with reveal-​the-​answer gatefolds to make the book engaging for younger readers or read-​aloud listeners. I’m curious to hear how you got into writing picture books about these topics.

TB: Around 2012, I read a nonfiction book about people’s tools in various professions. This one was about the medical profession, so there were dental tools and doctors’ tools, and it was sort of a guessing game. It was a brilliant way to introduce kids to information because it started with something concrete. Then it told what that tool did, and they had to guess to whom it belonged. I got interested in adapting that idea and focusing on that career aspect. I was concerned at the time because Maine’s governor was raising flags about the fact that while we were encouraging more and more kids to go on to college, we were primarily looking at four-​year programs. It was true then, and it’s even more true now; very few kids who go on to school after high school go into the trades, and we’re desperately in need of people working in the trades.

I started thinking about that and thought, what about all the people who build houses? They have a lot of really specialized knowledge, and we need them. How do we encourage kids’ thinking to branch out in terms of what they might do for a profession? That’s how I got started with Whose Tools? and then Whose Truck? came next. I knew that so many preschool and kindergarten classes do community helpers, and there are a lot of community helpers who drive trucks as part of their work. I borrowed the concept from the book that I had read, but then I wanted to expand it to topics that kids would be interested in in the real world. I had hoped to help them to think about how those careers and job choices attached to those tools and vehicles might be ones they’re interested in.

JW: The latest one, Whose Big Rig?, just came out last year.

TB: I had long wanted to write about building a railway. Of course, for today’s young readers, building a railway is not what we might have encountered in books, even for you, I suspect, at a young age. It’s about light rail and moving people efficiently and cleanly from place to place. It’s such an important topic right now as we tackle climate change. I thought, here’s the opportunity to do that, but I knew nothing about building a light rail. Really, I knew nothing.

That was probably the very, very hardest book of the four books in the Whose? series I’ve written so far. I did lots of interviews–with people in those professions and also with manufacturers of that equipment. I actually talked to the manufacturer for the piece of machinery that lays out the rails, just to understand. Then multiple, multiple sketches and sets of sketches in which the editor, the illustrator (Ramon Olivera), and I were all looking at pictures of what was happening on the page—watching videos again—talking to manufacturers again. Is this rendering appropriate? Is it showing exactly what happens? It was fun, but it was so labor intense.

JW: When I spoke with you back in 2020, we discussed how picture book word counts had decreased for manuscripts, particularly fiction books. What are your thoughts on this trend, and do you think the industry will go back to longer fictional word counts?

TB: I don’t think it’ll ever go back, and I’m sad about that. From my perspective, there’s room for longer picture books for older students, but picture books have moved away from being published for older students. My first picture book, The Sea Chest (illustrated by Mary GrandPre), was 1231 words long, which would never happen today. Nonfiction picture books are definitely longer. But fiction picture books, editors say over and over again, they’re “looking for fewer than 500 words and if you could keep it under 300, that would be great.” Since I talked to your class, I bet it’s that lower bar of 300 words that is most common. I’m in a critique group where all of us write picture books. We work really hard to trim word count in every manuscript we critique. How can you use illustrations to support this idea? Does it have to be written on the page? It’s really a challenge.

JW: Finding a way to make biographies appealing to young readers is so important. What advantages do you see to using picture books to present this material, such as in When Sue Found Sue, illustrated by Diana Sudyka?

TB: It’s entirely biographical and could be expanded into a full-​length middle-​grade biography on Sue Hendrickson. In terms of a picture book biography, you have to bring the picture book ethos to the real living character, or once-​living character, if it’s somebody who’s deceased, and bring that person to life.

I wrote my first picture book biography, A Passion for Elephants (illustrated by Holly Berry), about field scientist Cynthia Moss, who has spent her entire career–about 45 years–studying the elephants of Amboseli National Park in Kenya. I had worked so hard on that with my Maine critique group. At the end, when I thought I was done, my critique partner, Cynthia Lord, said, “I have a question for you. I think you need one more revision, and it’s going to be guided by the answer to this question. “What is the one thing that defines Cynthia? What brings her to life more than anything else?”

If you’ve read that book, you’ll know that the answer to that question is the guiding principle of that book. Cynthia Moss wasn’t afraid of big things. Obviously, she wasn’t afraid of those elephants. She wasn’t afraid to go off and live in Africa, a place she had never been, where she found her passion and her career. It isn’t a small thing to bring a living, or once-​living, person to life on the page when it all has to be 100% legitimate and true. The key for me has been to find that one defining characteristic of the person that informs their whole life.

JW: With the pandemic and as more and more books are delivered in an electronic format, libraries are shifting gears as they loan out e‑books. What do you see as the librarian’s role with this new format? 

TB: It depends on whether we’re talking about picture books, middle-​grade, or young adult. I do much of my adult reading electronically for the convenience of it, and of course, I use my library to borrow those books as well as buy electronic books. But I don’t like the experience of reading picture books electronically because the device defines the visual experience. We all know that monitors can change colors, and it’s pretty hard to cuddle with an iPad, laptop, or phone, but I don’t think that the format of publication, whether it’s paper or electronic, has changed the role of the librarian. Information uncovering aside–that’s a huge role of librarians–let’s look at the role of the librarian in books, which is to connect the reader with the best and most appropriate book for their need, their personality, their reading interest, or the type of reader they are. It doesn’t matter what format the book is. What matters is that the librarian knows and understands the child and the child’s interests. That was one of the biggest pleasures for me. Last month, one of my critique partners and I were looking at her manuscript, which features a library, and I said, you can’t forget how absolutely delightful it is for librarians to match the reader with the book.

JW: I know that doing author visits is one aspect of your job you love. What have been the challenges this last couple of years as school visits have gone virtual? Do you feel that you can connect as well as in person?

TB: I miss being in person with the kids. There’s an energy that happens between an audience and an author, whether that audience is a small classroom group or whether it’s 500 children in a gathering space. There’s a palpable energy in the air that’s missing in virtual visits, but that’s what we have, and hopefully, that will be over soon. It’s important that we authors continue to connect with our readers, but it’s a very different experience. I can’t hear their gasps; I can’t hear their giggles. They can’t experience my actions in my presentations, and I also use a lot of puppets with young children. It’s not the same experience on a static screen.

JW: As someone who loves traveling, I found The Twelve Days of Christmas in New England (illustrated by Liza Woodruff) to be a very enjoyable read. If you made another one in this series, which place would you choose next?

TB: Because Florida is my other home, I would have chosen it. However, Florida was already done, so I was asked specifically to do New England because I’m from there. But if I could expand the parameters of the series, which of course I can in my imagination, one of my very favorite places in the world is Kenya, Africa. I’ve been twice, and I would love to go back again. What a great experience it would be to decide where the child character in the book was going to visit in a country that is so different, and then to expose kids here to how different life is in such a faraway place. It’d be really fun to have a series formulated in the format of letters and have them come from other places in the world.

JW: I want to congratulate you on your newest fiction picture book, Pa, Me, and Our Sidewalk Pantry, coming out next year. As you approach 30 published picture books–an impressive number!–what’s been the most fun part about developing picture books?

TB: It’s always the character, who in Pa, Me, and Our Sidewalk Pantry is named Jelly Bean. The illustrations being drawn by Zara González Hoang seem to be taking Jelly Bean in a male direction, while I had thought Jelly Bean was female. A really fun part of picture books is that your character comes alive under the drawing implement of somebody else. For me, I just love knowing the internal workings of the character and how that character’s personality plays out in the situation I put them in. I like setting and find it very easy to write, and I think my dialogue is quite true to conversation, partly because I know kids so well. The deepest self of the characters is the most fun part of writing fiction for me.

By the way, in keeping with my balance of fiction and nonfiction picture book titles, I also have a nonfiction title coming out next year, Eat Your Superpowers: How Colorful Foods Keep You Healthy and Strong, illustrated by Serge Bloch and my first middle grade novel, with a working title of Light on Shadow Mountain. So books #31 and #32!

JW: For someone just getting started in the industry, what single piece of advice would you want to pass along?

TB: I’m torn between offering advice about the creative part of the business and offering advice about the practical matters of the business, so I’ll offer two pieces of advice. First, in terms of creativity, anybody who’s going to be a writer, an illustrator, or both for children’s books is doing it because they love words, pictures, or both, and kids. They want to share that love through their creative process. So, don’t get overwhelmed by the difficult odds. We all know the odds are hard in this business. I don’t know if it’s still true, but when I was first breaking into the field, it took an average of nine years. I don’t know if anybody’s even still keeping those kinds of statistics. It took me five years as a librarian, and I had a lot of connections and a lot of insider knowledge. Don’t let the difficulty of achieving what you want to achieve get in the way of your creativity and your joy in creating the stories, the words, or the illustrations.

JW: Great advice.

TB: But then, I’m also going to say something that sort of refutes that. Be as smart as you can be about what’s being published in the industry. Who is publishing it? Which editors are interested? What genres, topics, or approaches? Here’s how I would suggest you do that, and it worked for me. I kept my eye not only on the Society for Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI) national publications and monthly newsletters, but I also watched its regional chapters located all over the country. I read their newsletters because there were always interviews and heads-​up about who’s going where, which editor has changed houses, and which editor likes funny picture books, etc. Just basic practical, keeping track of what’s happening in the industry. What different publishers are publishing, which editors are open to submissions, and which types of books. I kept the information in an Excel spreadsheet, but however you want to do it is fine. Nowadays, it’d be a great project with documents that can be shared like a Google doc.

So, my two kinds of encouragement are to be smart about the business, but don’t let the business demands and discouragements impede your love of the process.

JW: Okay, Toni, it’s time for the SIX QUESTION LIGHTNING ROUND. Fast questions with equally fast answers. Are you ready?

TB: Yes!

JW: One Cool Friend is my favorite of your picture books. What sea animal would YOU take home from the aquarium?

TB: Oh yeah, jellyfish.

JW: What’s your favorite type of pie?

TB: Absolutely, it’s Chocolate Silk.

JW: Who was your favorite character from a book as a child?

TB: Ramona Quimby.

JW: Five words that describe your writing process.

TB: Messy, joyful, inconsistent, not scheduled, and hopeful.

JW: What’s a recent picture book that really got your attention?

TB: Watercress by Andrea Wang with illustrations by Jason Chin.

JW: What’s your favorite thing about your writing cottage?

TB: Oh, everything! My most favorite thing about it is that my husband Ken Cyll built it for me.

JW: Thanks so much for your time, Toni!

TB: You’re so welcome!

Picture Book Review: Mommy’s Hometown by Hope Lim

Author: Hope Lim
Illustrator: Jaime Kim
Candlewick
12 April 2022
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Joshua Walls (an OPB newcomer!) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.


—Joshua’s Review of the Writing—

Hope Lim’s third picture book, Mommy’s Hometown, shares a timeless story about a young child who travels overseas with his mother to visit her childhood hometown in South Korea. Despite his surprise at discovering how much her town has changed since she left, he can still relive his mother’s memories while creating new ones with her.

Every night at home, as part of their bedtime routine, the mother paints vivid pictures of her memories for her son. “She and her friends would walk to the river and play there all day. They caught fish, unearthed treasures beneath rocks, splashed each other, and dried themselves on the pebbled riverbank.” As a boy, I dreamed about where my family members grew up, and even today, I still do this with my friends living abroad, creating colorful images in my mind. When a story tugs at your memories, you know you’re in for a treat.

After listening to all his mother’s stories, the day finally comes for the boy to visit the town he has only imagined. Upon arriving, however, he discovers that it’s different. The little town he pictured has become a bustling city. “The new replaced the old,” his mother explains. The son doubts it’s the same place his mother grew up, but with help from his family, he overcomes uncertainties and discovers the town he envisioned in the present.

I adore how the story ends. The son and his mother visit the river where they play together, and the son discovers his mother’s younger side. Then, hearing Grandma call to them, the boy and his mother “run home together,” allowing the reader to reflect on the joy of shared moments. I’ll let Austin go into detail about the art, but I love the final illustrations of the mother and son, both as kids running home through the town the boy always imagined. The last page slowly resets back to reality, with both characters clearly having the time of their lives. These three pages make an already compelling story even more impactful.

Lim uses simple language that’ll make the reader finds themselves wanting to share their childhood tales as they tell her story. The son’s character arc is delightful. While it never hurts to get help, the boy shakes off his doubts and accepts the town’s changes, allowing him to build his own childhood memories. His experiences provide wonderful discussion opportunities. The reader can reassure a child that changes may happen, but change is okay. While things may not always be as we imagine, we may discover they’re even better.

Lim narrates a gentle, heartfelt story that I absolutely loved reading. It reminds me a lot of my hometown, Duluth, Georgia, and how it continues to evolve from a small Atlanta suburb into a prosperous, diverse community, rich in its own history. Mommy’s Hometown captures how places may appear different than described. It’s wonderful when a picture book taps into a timeless theme. I look forward to one day reading this story with my own curious child.

4.75 out of 5 unearthed treasures

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It’s the trip of a lifetime for the child narrator, as he discovers the world of his mother’s bedtime stories is neither as he imagined nor as she described them, because time has moved on. As Hope Lim crafts this tale of a child first confronted with the four-​dimensional shape of the world, illustrator Jaime Kim brings the experience to life in a series of lush two-​page spreads and sequential vignettes which give a subtle glow to both natural and urban landscapes.

Kim is a #1 New York Times bestselling illustrator, and it’s easy to see why. Her figures are universal, simplistic, yet evocative–all that’s necessary to imagine ourselves in their place. The characters are, in a sense, background to the lovingly rendered environment. And yet, when she depicts the child and mother at the same age, running through the laneway hand in hand, its emotional impact is devastating.

By contrast, the landscapes are very specific, but with masterful depth of field, they create just enough detail and texture to make them visceral and sentimental without being saccharine. It’s a genuine experience to which we can easily relate as a child first learns to contemplate the impermanence of life–those things that are timeless, and those that are not.

The pairing of Kim’s paintbrush with this weighty, poignant subject matter is pitch perfect. Perhaps the most so of any of her fifteen books to date. Her eye for creating a toy-​like world and playing with perspective without tilt-​shifting into miniaturization, is on glorious display here. Having seen her realize Lim’s narrative, one can hardly imagine anyone else doing it so well. Readers are so deftly embedded in the world of the artwork that they can almost feel the winds of change blowing through the characters’ hair. Exquisite.

**For an idea of what that looks like, you can check out Kim’s deliciously charming illustrations in animated GIFs on her website.**

5 out of 5 crayons


Joshua Walls is a children’s author and travel writer who isn’t afraid to fuse, challenge, or deconstruct genres in the pursuit of creating compelling stories. Currently, he lives in Sarasota, FL where he’s pursuing a BFA in Creative Writing at Ringling College of Art and Design. He’s also the co-​founder and co-​host of the Fluff It podcast.


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.