Agent Interview: Joyce Sweeney (The Seymour Agency)

This month’s Insider Interview is with Joyce Sweeney! Here in Florida, Joyce is a legendary figure who ran one of the most successful kidlit writing coach businesses—dozens of Joyce’s clients found publication thanks to their help and guidance. Joyce is a well-​published author on their own, too, having written more than a dozen novels for young adults.

A few years ago, Joyce became a literary agent for The Seymour Agency, and that’s where they’re dealing with picture books on a more regular basis.

Let’s hear from Joyce directly about this new career!


RVC: You’re clearly an animal lover–I saw your recent FB post where you talk about your dear friend at Flamingo Gardens…who happens to be a rescue crow.

JS: My husband and I are both dedicated animal lovers and rescuers. Most of our pets have been rescues and when we get free time, like last Saturday, we head to the wildlife areas immediately. I think I have done so well in nonfiction picture books because I have a great eye for nature and wildlife stories.

RVC: We’ll circle back on animals in a moment. In the meantime, tell me about your relationship with books as a kid.

JS: My mother was a book lover, who was actually shamed by her parents for “reading too much” and not going outside. So, I grew up showered in Little Golden Books and being read to all the time. Picture books transported me because story and art are possibly my two favorite things. One of my favorite “picture books” as a preschooler was a book of Chinese poetry for adults with beautiful watercolors. I pored over that book.

RVC: What specifically appealed to Young You about the art?

JS: It was unlike anything else I had seen. Watercolor art and scenes of Asian life. It was so beautiful!

RVC: Let’s jump ahead a bit. What future did you imagine for yourself when you attended Wright State University?

JS: I was planning to be the next JD Salinger. I got closer than I thought I would!

RVC: I assume you’re saying that because you had your own books published and not because of other Salingeresque things (being a hermit, refusing to be edited, suing your biographer, offering a residency for a cartoonist at your house, etc.).

JSYes, I was talking about his impact on teens through his writing.

RVC: Roger that! Please share how your five-​week classes at the Florida Center for the Book turned into the robust writing coach business that you did for so many years.

JS: I was in a rhythm of teaching regular classes at the library and there would be repeat students. I’d say, “How has your writing been going?” And they’d say, “It was great during the class, but then I stopped.” So, I realized writers needed a “never-​ending class” and I started one. People started getting published and the rest is Magic Bean history.

RVC: For those who don’t know, what’s the Magic Bean reference?

JS: When I started teaching ongoing workshops, and people started getting published, we decided there should be some kind of prize given out. I had a friend who had just gone to Costa Rica and she discovered the beautiful seeds of the Guanacaste tree. They seemed perfect. So, anyone I have helped, when they are traditionally published, they get one.

I think it was Sherri Winston who coined “magic beans.”

RVC: What’s one of your favorite success stories from your coaching days?

JS: Can’t choose! During the first two years of that class, I saw the launch of Alexandra Flinn, Dorian Cirrone, Noreen Wald (Nora Charles), Gloria Rothstein, Sherri Winston, and a slew of others. It was thrilling.

RVC: It sure sounds like it! Now, one of the things you’re famous for is being a true coach—caring and supporting your clients well beyond anything story related. What’s your secret?

JS: I care. I mean I really do. I know how they feel. I’ve lived everything, good and bad, that they go through. A writer starts talking to me, I want to put everything down and listen. And I can usually find a hopeful direction for them to take.

RVC: From my perspective, it looked like business was booming. Why make the switch to agenting?

JS: I really love change and I really love a challenge. This was a big one and it came out of left field because it was offered to me rather than something I went after. Nicole Resciniti [President of The Seymour Agency] surprised the heck out of me during a lunch meeting by just springing it on me. But she pointed out, “You’ve been doing this job for years. This just takes it to the next level.”

And she was right.

RVC: Why is The Seymour Agency a great fit for you?

JS: I think because of the tone Nicole sets. We have that same urge to mentor, nurture, make dreams come true. All the agents at Seymour support and help each other to an unbelievable extent. It’s a loving, supportive atmosphere. I’ve never been at another agency, but I think our vibe is quite rare.

RVC: Describe a typical workday as an agent.

JS: That’s the beauty of it–there’s no such thing. This morning, I have to sign off on a contract for a client, execute a contract with a new client, read several new picture books some clients want me to see, send out a middle grade on submission, and have a phone meeting with one of my favorite clients. There will be about twenty surprises that come in on top of that. The days literally fly by.

RVC: What is the most common misconception about agenting?

JS: That agents don’t care or take clients’ hopes and fears lightly. We think about all of them all the time.

RVC: What’s the story of—and behind—your first picture book sale?

JS: My lovely friend and client Mindy Weiss runs a little showcase on Twitter called Picture Book Party. My first year as an agent, I found several manuscripts I loved, including a lyrical PB called Peaches by Gabriele Davis. I remember telling my husband about it and saying I wished I could have Peaches but that writer is too good for a beginning agent. But we had a phone interview and Gabriele and I really clicked and she picked me!

RVC: Congrats on that!

JS: She is a dream client. She works hard and participates in the process well. A few months after we went out, we had two R&R’s [revise and resubmits] and from that came her sale to Abrams.

RVC: When might we see Peaches?

JS: It comes out next spring, and this book will always be special to me.

RVC: How do you collaborate with your clients to develop their picture book projects before submitting them to publishers?

JS: It’s an ongoing process. It’s not just how to edit or tweak what they have, but as they submit and start to get industry feedback, we have to collaborate on how to brand them, how to develop their uniqueness into something editors will clamor for. It takes a lot of time and thought to position a client to make a sale.

RVC: How do you balance the commercial appeal of a picture book with its artistic and literary merits?

JS: I think in kidlit, artistic and literary merit is PART of commercial appeal, because a lot of sales are awards driven or based on educational value, etc. The best projects always have both: literary and artistic merit and commercial hooks.

For example, there’s City Feet by Aixa Perez-​Prado, which is my first client book to come out just this past January. It’s so fun and kid friendly because of the rhythm and fun of the text and the kooky, funky shoes, but it also has Aixa’s beautiful, mixed-​media art, the multilingual text, and most fun for me, maps of cities around the world embedded in the collages.

RVC: Share an example of a picture book project that presented unique challenges or learning experiences.

JS: I had an author illustrator who kept getting the note that they loved her story but not her illustrations. That’s hard for an artist to hear. But she did the bravest thing I ever saw. She took a year off to raise her game, studying every technique she could find. She was already a trained artist, but she pushed it further. I admire that kind of dedication so much. I believe she is on the brink of her first sale right now.

RVC: I sure hope so–it sounds as if she earned it. Let’s talk about the business side of things. How do you stay updated on the latest industry news, trends, and best practices to best serve your clients?

JS: We have regular agency meetings, trainings, and updates. I get a slew of industry newsletters every day and I learn a lot just from interactions with editors and listening closely to what they’re saying. I hold regular meetings with clients and big group meetings about twice a year and try to brief them on the “state of the industry.” Plus, we have a Facebook page where they all share info they are finding out.

RVC: What challenges do you see facing the picture book industry today, and how can authors and illustrators adapt to these changes?

JS: It’s a robust industry and I’m thankful for that. The challenges seem to come and go. COVID was a challenge, paper costs was a big problem, then general supply chain issues. What I am seeing now is some editor burnout, I think from surviving all the things I mentioned above.

RVC: I’m seeing some of that, too.

JS: The good thing is, kids want and need books and that never changes.

RVC: In addition to your novels, you’ve published a number of poetry chapbooks. How does your work as a poet inform how you work with picture book texts?

JS: Sometimes I can make a really good editorial suggestions, like “end the line on THAT word.” That knowledge comes from poetry. And I definitely know good lyricism when I read it.

RVC: Talk to me about those magical power lunches. How often do they happen? What goes on? Do you split dessert or does everyone get their own? 

JS: The first rule at The Seymour Agency…the agent pays for everything. We are hosting and treating our clients and it’s a great, relaxed way to really talk in depth. I knew so many great local writers from Florida SCBWI and a lot of them became clients, so I can see them anytime. But some of my clients also travel and make regular pilgrimages, which I love.

It’s good to be Florida based. Everyone wants to come here.

RVC: Complete the sentence. Joyce Sweeney is an agent who…

JS: cares about your career and is responsive to your needs.

RVC: One last question for this part of the interview. What are some upcoming projects that you’re especially excited about?

JS: Barefoot Books is launching a series called OUR WORLD that takes a creative approach to showing different countries and cultures. I have two clients participating in that: Aixa Perez-​Prado for Argentina and Ana Siqueira for Brazil.

RVC: Okay, Joyce…it’s time for the LIGHTNING ROUND! Zippy questions and zappy answers, please. Are you ready?

JS: I was born ready!

RVC: Magic beans, magic wands, or magic hats?

JS: I actually have all three. Doesn’t every agent?

RVC: Most underappreciated astrological sign?

JS: Scorpio (yes, I am one). But we always get the “murderer” meme. And we are really very loving, protective people.

RVC: Favorite cat joke/​pun?

JS: An old woman was walking along the beach with her cat. She found a magic lamp and a genie appeared. He gave her three wishes. First, she wished to be young and beautiful. Granted. Then she wished to be rich. Granted. Third wish. She looked at her cat and said, “Turn him into a handsome young man.” Granted and the genie disappeared. The cat, now a handsome young man, stood before the now young beautiful, rich girl. And he said, “Aren’t you sorry you had me neutered?”

RVC: Favorite picture book that features an animal protagonist?

JS: Olivia!

RVC: What’s the last picture book that made you LOL?

JS: I read Mr. Tiger Goes Wild over and over.

RVC: Your picture book philosophy in five words or fewer. 

JS: Think like a child!

RVC: Thanks so much, Joyce! 

JS: Thank you! These were great questions!!!

Educational Activities: My Dog is NOT a Scientist by Betsy Ellor

My Dog Is NOT a Scientist
Author: Betsy Ellor
Illustrator: Luisa Vera
18 April 2023
Yeehoo Press
40 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “A humorous, endearing story about a passionate, young scientist who is determined to achieve her goal–no matter what! Yara is out to prove that she’s the greatest scientist in town! Her annoying neighbor Eddie always wins the Science Fair, but this year is going to be HER year. Like every good scientist, Yara starts with a question, makes observations, and comes up with a hypothesis … but each time she starts an experiment, her dog, Renzo, ruins it! Could Renzo be up to something more than making trouble? From Betsy Ellor and Luisa Vera comes a humorous, endearing story about a passionate, young scientist who is determined to achieve her goal–no matter what!”



Educational Activities inspired by My Dog Is Not a Scientist:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front cover: 
    • What do you think the title A Dog is NOT a Scientist means?
    • Can you predict what the story might be about based on the cover?
    • What qualities do you think a scientist should have?
    • Why do you think the dog is wearing safety goggles on the cover?
    • What are some ways animals can help humans learn and discover new things?
    • What do you think the dog might try to do in this story?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • What was the main conflict in the story, and how was it resolved?
    • How did the Renzo the dog’s actions lead to humorous situations in the story?
    • In what ways did Renzo help the other characters learn or discover something new?
    • What lesson do you think the author wanted readers to learn from the story?
    • Which part of the story was your favorite, and why?
    • How did the illustrations help to convey the story’s message and enhance the overall reading experience?
    • Were there any moments in the story that surprised you? If so, which ones?
  • Writing–Pretend you are Renzo the dog in the story and write a journal entry about your experience trying to be a scientist. How did it feel when things didn’t go as planned, and what did you learn? Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to illustrate that story, if you choose. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Experimenting–Yara’s a young scientist, and you can be too! With an adult–and maybe a “helper” dog like Renzo–test out any of the following kid-​friendly experiments. 
  • Further ReadingMy Dog Is NOT a Scientist is indeed about science in general and science fairs in specific. Let’s look at some other picture books about those same topics. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

Author Interview: Darshana Khiani

This month’s interview is with Darshana Khiani, a San Francisco Bay area author, engineer, and advocate for South Asian children’s literature. In her own words, she’s “infinitely curious about the world and enjoys sharing my findings with young readers. If I can make a child laugh, even better.”

Darshana has authored a picture book, How to Wear a Sari, and she has two more coming out in 2023. She’s also a South Asian kidlit advocate, helping to spread the word of wonderful new South Asian kidlit books.

In addition to being a wife and a mom to two girls and one dog, she’s also created a wonderful list of Favorite Firsts.

  1. Favorite first friend: Sigrid
  2. Favorite first color: lavender
  3. Favorite first food: pizza and pav bhaji (kind of like a vegetarian sloppy joe)
  4. Favorite first book: Richard Scarry. I still love What Do People Do All Day.
  5. Favorite first subject in school: Math (ironically English was my worst…but I loved creative writing!)
  6. Favorite first song: The Tide is High by Blondie
  7. Favorite first trip: Kenya

What a list, right? Let’s find out even more about Darshana with this interview!


RVC: Fewer than half of the authors I interview are full-​time writers. Where does writing fit into your typical workday?

DK: I am a full-​time engineer working in high-​tech with a family and a dog. So, writing takes places early in the mornings or late at night or anywhere in-​between I can find time.

RVC: How has that relationship changed over the years?

DK: I adjust my writing times around my other responsibilities. When I first started, I would take my writing bag to my kids’ practices or write late at night. Now, I tend to write first thing in the morning and on weekends, sometimes during lunch.

RVC: At what point in your life did you first consider yourself to be a writer? 

DK: Probably a few years in.

RVC: You ran a blog about children’s books for a long time before you got your own debut picture book published. How did that work inform or help your own writing?

DK: The blog, Flowering Minds, was a great way for me to talk about and recommend books which I love to do. I knew that writers had to read voraciously, so why not be a resource and give recommendations along the way? By reading a lot, it helped me focus on writing stories that hadn’t been done before.

RVC: You’re a champion of South Asian kidlit. What’s the latest report on the state of that as of today?

DK: Thank you for asking. I am floored by the number of books coming out every season by South Asian creators. When I started compiling the lists back in 2016, there were less than 5 South Asian picture books those first two years. Now there are at least 5 picture books a season!

In novels, there is such a variety of books from contemporary, historical fiction, fantasy, mystery, and rom-​com. Now all we need is some suspense and horror 😉 and older non-fiction.

RVC: Your debut picture book is a wonderful addition to the world of South Asian kidlit. What’s the story behind How to Wear a Sari?

DK: When I started writing picture books, I wanted to write books for second-​generation South Asians like my two daughters. Books that centered their lives in this country. Books that had universal themes about growing up with a South Asian backdrop and a touch of humor.

In the summer of 2016, I was studying 2nd-​person POV picture books for a different writing project. I love the elegance and sophistication of saris. However, I’m not the best at wearing them. It can take me upwards of 45 minutes to drape one. I started wondering if it’s this hard for me to wear a sari then what would it be like for a young Indian girl. That was the seed for How to Wear a Sari. A sari can be stylish, sophisticated, a symbol of womanhood in South Asian culture much like wearing high-​heels or a long fancy gown is in Western culture.

RVC: Why is the sari so important to South Asian culture?

DK: There are so many varieties of materials, designs, and draping styles. Much of it is unique to the region where the sari was made. It is an expression of identity. Saris span the range from simple cotton ones worn every day while tending house to fancy, elaborate ones for special occasions.

RVC: Back to your book! How to Wear a Sari has an especially resonant ending. At what stage in the drafting process did that emerge?

DK: I knew from the beginning that she was going to run and fall, and that was the original ending. Over the revision process, the fall scene became the climax, and the ending became the spread about getting in trouble with mom. But that left the story on an emotional down note, so I brainstormed possible endings. I came up with the photo album of flops to honor the challenges and spills kids and even adults have when trying new things. I loved it since it felt fresh and brought in another layer to the story.

RVC: As a writer, what was the most valuable lesson you took from this book?

DK: I love the story voice by using a direct narration approach, however, it is a challenge to get character emotion across. Joanne’s artwork is so expressive and was a perfect match for the text.

RVC: You’ve got another picture book coming out in a few weeks. What’s the elevator pitch?

DK: A classroom full of diverse students discusses what it means to be American. They show that in spite of our varied backgrounds and experiences it is our shared American values that bring us together.

RVC: What are you most proud about regarding I’m an American?

DK: That I was able to capture the vision I had on paper. It’s a book for all ages 8 and up. For younger readers, it might be the first time they hear a particular group’s immigration story, while for older readers they might see an event through a new lens. What I hope above all is that readers will look beyond the differences on the surface and realize our shared humanity.

I love Laura’s stunning artwork with layered images.

RVC: Which of Laura Freeman’s illustrations most knocked your socks off?

 

DK: Probably the Somali and Russian Jew spreads. There is no way NOT to be moved by them. I do like the joyous spread of the Pride parade, too.

RVC: Now, you’ve got yet another book coming out later in 2023—Building a Dream: How the Boys of Koh Panyee Became Champions. What’s the most important thing people should know or understand about that?

DK: I loved how the boys faced their environmental and societal challenges with perseverance, hope, and ingenuity.

RVC: In what ways does that book showcase your growth as a writer?

DK: Actually, of my three books, this one was written before the other two. The story I’m an American is my most “recent” story. It’s the first story I ever did with layered text, substantial backmatter, lots and lots of research, and an eye on sensitivity the entire time.

RVC: Let’s move to talking about bigger things. Stylistically speaking, how do you describe your writing?

DK: I have no idea. Maybe my readers know. 😉

RVC: Talk a bit about your writing and revision process.

DK: I hate writing first drafts. I have a really strong left-​brain editor, probably because I’m an engineer, so those first drafts feel near impossible. However, I do love revising except when I have to take a polished story and break it into pieces and start all over–that may actually be harder than writing a first draft. One of my favorite parts of revising is collecting peer feedback and then copying down the notes with different colored pens into various categories and then methodically making the revisions that resonate.

RVC: Tell me about a time where your writing career didn’t go the way you wanted.

DK: I don’t know if there is a specific thing that didn’t work out. The writing journey is a windy one with ups & downs and twists & turns. But I believe everything happens the way it’s supposed to. I did think my writing career would be progressing a little faster. When I started back in 2011, I had no idea it would take seven years before I got my first book deal.

RVC: Since COVID-​19, I try to ask a health and wellness question during each interview. Here’s yours. What do you do to de-stress? 

DK: Eat dark chocolate, go for a walk, talk to my sister, or watch a pick-​me-​up TV show (nothing too serious).

RVC: One final question for this part of the interview. What’s something upcoming that you’re really excited about or really want to promote?

DK: I run a South Asian kidlit quarterly newsletter. I feature the upcoming season’s South Asian kidlit books, picture books through young adult. I have been doing this for nearly eight years. It is wonderful to see the quantity and diversity of stories coming out. Folks can check-​out my South Asian kidlit page to see past lists.

RVC: Alrighty, Darshana. Let’s leap into the LIGHTNING ROUND. The point values are quintupled but we’ve only got sixty seconds. Are you ready?

DK: Fire away!

RVC: What’s the funniest word in the English language?

DK: ugh (no, that’s not the word, my mind is a blank)… hmmm… hullabaloo

RVC: If you could travel back in time, what year would you choose to go to?

DK: Victorian Era.

RVC: Would you rather have a personal chef, a maid, or a masseuse?

DK: You mean I can’t have all there?!?! Okay, a chef since I enjoy eating but not cooking.

RVC: Which author sets the standard for South Asian kidlit?

DK: There are so many talented authors and illustrators that are pushing the boundaries and carving new paths in different ways. The South Asian community is a diaspora spread around the world with varying degrees of commonality and nuanced experiences amongst the sub-groups.

Here are some of the creators I enjoy.

Hari & Deepti’s light box art. Intricate and ethereal! They have done a picture book as well as book covers.

Mitali Perkins, Sabaa Tahir, Samira Ahmed, Rina Singh, Padma Venkatraman, and Rajani LaRocca.

RVC: What’s the best picture book you’ve read in 2022 that deserves a lot more love than it’s gotten?

DK: I recently read The Box by Isabella Paglia and Paolo Proietti and translated by Laura Watkinson. This book was first published Italy and released in English in the U.S. in Jan 2020. I only heard about it recently. It’s sweet and heart-​warming and is all about helping a newcomer and meeting that person where they are and patience.

RVC: What’s your picture book philosophy in five words or fewer?

DK: Follow your curiosity!

RVC: Love it. Thanks so much, Darshana!

Picture Book Review: Busy Feet by Marcia Berneger

Starry Forest Books
14 February 2023
24 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend (and Ringling College of Art and Design Illustration Professor) John Herzog.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

It’s always a bit challenging to review a book with minimal text and eye-​catching art. That’s the situation here with Busy Feet, where a pair of kids go throughout their day with the emphasis being on the range of activities they experience in a kind of Energizer-​bunny fashion. You almost never see their faces to the point that the feet themselves are essentially the main characters. I’ll let John explain the ifs, hows, and whys of the art’s effectiveness below, but I suggest it’s likely due to vibrant colors and a strong sense of motion.

Let’s circle back to the text. The rhymes are purposefully basic and appear to be chosen with a goal of showcasing opposites (hot/​cold, go/​stop, high/​low) to help very young readers learn important words and concepts. To ensure readers notice these common antonyms, they’re always in UPPER CASE lettering in the text.

The book is especially short for a picture book (24 pages versus the standard 32). Was it originally intended to be a board book? I wouldn’t be surprised to learn that, considering the level of text. This feels like a book intended for 2- to 4‑year olds, though kids in the images seem older than that mid- to late-​toddler age. I’m pleased to see that the main two kids/​pairs of feet showcase a biracial friendship, and in the cameos of other kids/​feet, there’s a child in a wheelchair zooming along. For a pretty small cast of characters/​feet, that’s a lot of range.

In the absence of a more defined storyline and with rhyming text this minimal, I prefer to find true rhymes (high/​sky) versus near rhymes (done/​come). Leaning into the accents in addition to being attentive to syllable counts and rhymes often gives subtle oomph to the text, as well.

Still, Busy Feet this has a pleasing read-​aloud quality. And, as John will explain in a moment, the art is sure to appeal. That’s a nice combination. But I wonder–since toddlers buzz through their days in a whirlwind of activity, might we see sequels that showcase other busy toddler body parts? I’m imagining hands and mouths, but surely other options might prove equally intriguing.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

–John’s Review of the Illustrations–

Reading Busy Feet reminded me of this quote from Douglas Horton:

The art of simplicity is a puzzle of complexity.”

Susanna Chapman’s illustrations for Busy Feet exemplifies this beautifully. The colors, patterns, design of the characters and peripheral elements – it all feels so simple, yet there’s a heart of complexity beating here.

Even simpler is the story, written by Marcia Berneger. Typeset in Futura (a Wes Anderson staple) and coupled with the simply complex illustrations, this feels more like a visual tone poem than a picture book. The design choices and visual flourishes give this an almost hallucinogenic feeling, which is exactly what the book needs.

I personally found the story (if it can be called that) somewhat lacking, but perhaps I’m expecting too much. After all, if the story were to be more straightforward, perhaps the balance of the simple story with the complex illustrations would cause it to feel a bit uneven. Nevertheless, I think there were more opportunities for Berneger to explore, especially given that the book takes the point-​of-​view of a little dog following along with the exploits of his child compatriots.

That’s the only weak link, really. On the other hand, the illustrations are incredibly effective and, most importantly, fun. This book is chock-​full of abstraction, interesting perspectives, textures you can really sink your teeth into, and old school printing imperfections – such as misaligned print plates. The style is very retro, which helps to make Busy Feet feel at home in both 1963 and 2023.

I have no doubt that this will end up being one of my favorite books of the year thanks to Chapman’s outstanding illustrations.

4.5 out of 5 crayons


John Herzog is an illustrator and educator. He has created work for Scholastic, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, Little, Brown and Company, Highlights for Children, DreamWorks TV, and Hasbro. He also teaches illustration at Ringling College of Art and Design.

John is a member of the National Cartoonists Society and the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, where he received the 2018 SCBWI Magazine Merit Award. He lives in Florida with his family.

John is represented by Kayla Cichello at Upstart Crow Literary.