Picture Book Review: The Night Tent by Landis Blair

Margaret Ferguson Books
18 April 2023
40 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and OPB friend, Rebecca Zomchek.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

From the first page of Landis Blair’s debut picture book, readers encounter a scenario we all know–a child in bed is uncomfortable when considering all the worrisome things that MIGHT be lurking in the dark. The more he tries not to think about it, the more he does.

Then the child (his name is Watson) notices an odd light coming from beneath the covers, so what else can he do but check it out? Once he ducks beneath the covers, he finds himself under a giant tent where the roof is covered with stars (thus the title, one assumes).

It’s more than a tent, though–there on the ground before Watson is a magical pathway weaving its way to a strange forest. Yes, there are unmistakable Where the Wild Things Are vibes here as Watson encounters creatures among the trees. We already know he’s scared of creatures in the night, so it’s no shocker that he hides at first, but after giving us the ongoing refrain (“and since Watson wasn’t sleepy”), which justifies his decision to proceed each time in the face of potential peril, he joins them as “he ran and played with them along the forest path.”

Despite Watson’s insistence that he’s not tired, he looks sleepier by the page as he gets on a trolley and “traveled through an ancient city, along treacherous cliffs, and over the sea to a tiny island with a very tall tower.” Up he climbs as his eyes droop and his shoulders slump, and then he crawls out from under the cover and is zonked–way too tired to worry about monsters or darkness or anything except sleep.

I’ll let Rebecca explain how the art steals the show here, but I can see where parents might be pleased how this story demonstrates how a child can find their way to sleep on their own. Yeah, it’s Maurice Sendak with kid gloves, but the dreamlike art, gentle mood, and quiet, comforting language will be welcome fare for many families.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

–Rebecca’s Review of the Illustrations–

I first became aware of Landis Blair’s work from his illustrations for From Here to Eternity by Caitlin Doughy. His pen and ink work interested me then as I am a fan of both his style and influences, and I was very excited for the opportunity to see and review his debut picture book.

In a layered style full of strong ink values and hatch marks, reminiscent of both Edward Gorey and Tove Jannson, Blair takes on a night-​time adventure with young boy Watson and how his imagination takes him from being afraid of the darkness in his room into a sprawling Where the Wild Things Are type of adventure through a magical landscape.

Watson tries and fails to sleep while being afraid of his dark bedroom. After discovering a light coming from under his covers we and Watson go on a starlit journey through deep forests, meeting friendly monsters, and traveling down a winding path to a high tower. These are all depicted in cool blues, greens and purples, with pops of muted yellow and black crosshatching applied to add depth and texture. This helps with both the nighttime feeling and both the idea of being outside and inside a dream.

We and Watson discover just how far our imaginations can take us and how the power of creativity and thinking of positive things can help us overcome our fears and find peace and rest.

Blair balances his many armed and mix and match animal/​monsters and darker color palette with whimsy, and inviting smiles, managing to side-​step being scary and creating a world that feels very dream-​like. The story itself is simple and straightforward but is warm and gentle which helps balance the surreal world he creates. Watson also being one of the warmest elements in the books helps draw our eye to him and the many long paths create fun eye movement as you move through the story.

I hope this book lulls many children to sleep while following Watson’s journey, just as it did for him. I also hope anyone enjoying the book is able to twinkle with their own stars when faced with worries and fears, remembering that our thoughts and dreams can be there for us when things are dark.

4.75 out of 5 crayons


Rebecca Zomchek is a children’s book illustrator who has worked as a concept artist and cartoonist. She earned her BFA from Syracuse University and her MFA from The School of Visual Arts; she is now the Associate Dean of Entertainment Design at the Columbus College of Art and Design. Rebecca loves watching the stars and going on adventures through the woods.

Visit her at www.rzillustration.com.

Agent Interview: Joyce Sweeney (The Seymour Agency)

This month’s Insider Interview is with Joyce Sweeney! Here in Florida, Joyce is a legendary figure who ran one of the most successful kidlit writing coach businesses—dozens of Joyce’s clients found publication thanks to their help and guidance. Joyce is a well-​published author on their own, too, having written more than a dozen novels for young adults.

A few years ago, Joyce became a literary agent for The Seymour Agency, and that’s where they’re dealing with picture books on a more regular basis.

Let’s hear from Joyce directly about this new career!


RVC: You’re clearly an animal lover–I saw your recent FB post where you talk about your dear friend at Flamingo Gardens…who happens to be a rescue crow.

JS: My husband and I are both dedicated animal lovers and rescuers. Most of our pets have been rescues and when we get free time, like last Saturday, we head to the wildlife areas immediately. I think I have done so well in nonfiction picture books because I have a great eye for nature and wildlife stories.

RVC: We’ll circle back on animals in a moment. In the meantime, tell me about your relationship with books as a kid.

JS: My mother was a book lover, who was actually shamed by her parents for “reading too much” and not going outside. So, I grew up showered in Little Golden Books and being read to all the time. Picture books transported me because story and art are possibly my two favorite things. One of my favorite “picture books” as a preschooler was a book of Chinese poetry for adults with beautiful watercolors. I pored over that book.

RVC: What specifically appealed to Young You about the art?

JS: It was unlike anything else I had seen. Watercolor art and scenes of Asian life. It was so beautiful!

RVC: Let’s jump ahead a bit. What future did you imagine for yourself when you attended Wright State University?

JS: I was planning to be the next JD Salinger. I got closer than I thought I would!

RVC: I assume you’re saying that because you had your own books published and not because of other Salingeresque things (being a hermit, refusing to be edited, suing your biographer, offering a residency for a cartoonist at your house, etc.).

JSYes, I was talking about his impact on teens through his writing.

RVC: Roger that! Please share how your five-​week classes at the Florida Center for the Book turned into the robust writing coach business that you did for so many years.

JS: I was in a rhythm of teaching regular classes at the library and there would be repeat students. I’d say, “How has your writing been going?” And they’d say, “It was great during the class, but then I stopped.” So, I realized writers needed a “never-​ending class” and I started one. People started getting published and the rest is Magic Bean history.

RVC: For those who don’t know, what’s the Magic Bean reference?

JS: When I started teaching ongoing workshops, and people started getting published, we decided there should be some kind of prize given out. I had a friend who had just gone to Costa Rica and she discovered the beautiful seeds of the Guanacaste tree. They seemed perfect. So, anyone I have helped, when they are traditionally published, they get one.

I think it was Sherri Winston who coined “magic beans.”

RVC: What’s one of your favorite success stories from your coaching days?

JS: Can’t choose! During the first two years of that class, I saw the launch of Alexandra Flinn, Dorian Cirrone, Noreen Wald (Nora Charles), Gloria Rothstein, Sherri Winston, and a slew of others. It was thrilling.

RVC: It sure sounds like it! Now, one of the things you’re famous for is being a true coach—caring and supporting your clients well beyond anything story related. What’s your secret?

JS: I care. I mean I really do. I know how they feel. I’ve lived everything, good and bad, that they go through. A writer starts talking to me, I want to put everything down and listen. And I can usually find a hopeful direction for them to take.

RVC: From my perspective, it looked like business was booming. Why make the switch to agenting?

JS: I really love change and I really love a challenge. This was a big one and it came out of left field because it was offered to me rather than something I went after. Nicole Resciniti [President of The Seymour Agency] surprised the heck out of me during a lunch meeting by just springing it on me. But she pointed out, “You’ve been doing this job for years. This just takes it to the next level.”

And she was right.

RVC: Why is The Seymour Agency a great fit for you?

JS: I think because of the tone Nicole sets. We have that same urge to mentor, nurture, make dreams come true. All the agents at Seymour support and help each other to an unbelievable extent. It’s a loving, supportive atmosphere. I’ve never been at another agency, but I think our vibe is quite rare.

RVC: Describe a typical workday as an agent.

JS: That’s the beauty of it–there’s no such thing. This morning, I have to sign off on a contract for a client, execute a contract with a new client, read several new picture books some clients want me to see, send out a middle grade on submission, and have a phone meeting with one of my favorite clients. There will be about twenty surprises that come in on top of that. The days literally fly by.

RVC: What is the most common misconception about agenting?

JS: That agents don’t care or take clients’ hopes and fears lightly. We think about all of them all the time.

RVC: What’s the story of—and behind—your first picture book sale?

JS: My lovely friend and client Mindy Weiss runs a little showcase on Twitter called Picture Book Party. My first year as an agent, I found several manuscripts I loved, including a lyrical PB called Peaches by Gabriele Davis. I remember telling my husband about it and saying I wished I could have Peaches but that writer is too good for a beginning agent. But we had a phone interview and Gabriele and I really clicked and she picked me!

RVC: Congrats on that!

JS: She is a dream client. She works hard and participates in the process well. A few months after we went out, we had two R&R’s [revise and resubmits] and from that came her sale to Abrams.

RVC: When might we see Peaches?

JS: It comes out next spring, and this book will always be special to me.

RVC: How do you collaborate with your clients to develop their picture book projects before submitting them to publishers?

JS: It’s an ongoing process. It’s not just how to edit or tweak what they have, but as they submit and start to get industry feedback, we have to collaborate on how to brand them, how to develop their uniqueness into something editors will clamor for. It takes a lot of time and thought to position a client to make a sale.

RVC: How do you balance the commercial appeal of a picture book with its artistic and literary merits?

JS: I think in kidlit, artistic and literary merit is PART of commercial appeal, because a lot of sales are awards driven or based on educational value, etc. The best projects always have both: literary and artistic merit and commercial hooks.

For example, there’s City Feet by Aixa Perez-​Prado, which is my first client book to come out just this past January. It’s so fun and kid friendly because of the rhythm and fun of the text and the kooky, funky shoes, but it also has Aixa’s beautiful, mixed-​media art, the multilingual text, and most fun for me, maps of cities around the world embedded in the collages.

RVC: Share an example of a picture book project that presented unique challenges or learning experiences.

JS: I had an author illustrator who kept getting the note that they loved her story but not her illustrations. That’s hard for an artist to hear. But she did the bravest thing I ever saw. She took a year off to raise her game, studying every technique she could find. She was already a trained artist, but she pushed it further. I admire that kind of dedication so much. I believe she is on the brink of her first sale right now.

RVC: I sure hope so–it sounds as if she earned it. Let’s talk about the business side of things. How do you stay updated on the latest industry news, trends, and best practices to best serve your clients?

JS: We have regular agency meetings, trainings, and updates. I get a slew of industry newsletters every day and I learn a lot just from interactions with editors and listening closely to what they’re saying. I hold regular meetings with clients and big group meetings about twice a year and try to brief them on the “state of the industry.” Plus, we have a Facebook page where they all share info they are finding out.

RVC: What challenges do you see facing the picture book industry today, and how can authors and illustrators adapt to these changes?

JS: It’s a robust industry and I’m thankful for that. The challenges seem to come and go. COVID was a challenge, paper costs was a big problem, then general supply chain issues. What I am seeing now is some editor burnout, I think from surviving all the things I mentioned above.

RVC: I’m seeing some of that, too.

JS: The good thing is, kids want and need books and that never changes.

RVC: In addition to your novels, you’ve published a number of poetry chapbooks. How does your work as a poet inform how you work with picture book texts?

JS: Sometimes I can make a really good editorial suggestions, like “end the line on THAT word.” That knowledge comes from poetry. And I definitely know good lyricism when I read it.

RVC: Talk to me about those magical power lunches. How often do they happen? What goes on? Do you split dessert or does everyone get their own? 

JS: The first rule at The Seymour Agency…the agent pays for everything. We are hosting and treating our clients and it’s a great, relaxed way to really talk in depth. I knew so many great local writers from Florida SCBWI and a lot of them became clients, so I can see them anytime. But some of my clients also travel and make regular pilgrimages, which I love.

It’s good to be Florida based. Everyone wants to come here.

RVC: Complete the sentence. Joyce Sweeney is an agent who…

JS: cares about your career and is responsive to your needs.

RVC: One last question for this part of the interview. What are some upcoming projects that you’re especially excited about?

JS: Barefoot Books is launching a series called OUR WORLD that takes a creative approach to showing different countries and cultures. I have two clients participating in that: Aixa Perez-​Prado for Argentina and Ana Siqueira for Brazil.

RVC: Okay, Joyce…it’s time for the LIGHTNING ROUND! Zippy questions and zappy answers, please. Are you ready?

JS: I was born ready!

RVC: Magic beans, magic wands, or magic hats?

JS: I actually have all three. Doesn’t every agent?

RVC: Most underappreciated astrological sign?

JS: Scorpio (yes, I am one). But we always get the “murderer” meme. And we are really very loving, protective people.

RVC: Favorite cat joke/​pun?

JS: An old woman was walking along the beach with her cat. She found a magic lamp and a genie appeared. He gave her three wishes. First, she wished to be young and beautiful. Granted. Then she wished to be rich. Granted. Third wish. She looked at her cat and said, “Turn him into a handsome young man.” Granted and the genie disappeared. The cat, now a handsome young man, stood before the now young beautiful, rich girl. And he said, “Aren’t you sorry you had me neutered?”

RVC: Favorite picture book that features an animal protagonist?

JS: Olivia!

RVC: What’s the last picture book that made you LOL?

JS: I read Mr. Tiger Goes Wild over and over.

RVC: Your picture book philosophy in five words or fewer. 

JS: Think like a child!

RVC: Thanks so much, Joyce! 

JS: Thank you! These were great questions!!!

Educational Activities: My Dog is NOT a Scientist by Betsy Ellor

My Dog Is NOT a Scientist
Author: Betsy Ellor
Illustrator: Luisa Vera
18 April 2023
Yeehoo Press
40 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “A humorous, endearing story about a passionate, young scientist who is determined to achieve her goal–no matter what! Yara is out to prove that she’s the greatest scientist in town! Her annoying neighbor Eddie always wins the Science Fair, but this year is going to be HER year. Like every good scientist, Yara starts with a question, makes observations, and comes up with a hypothesis … but each time she starts an experiment, her dog, Renzo, ruins it! Could Renzo be up to something more than making trouble? From Betsy Ellor and Luisa Vera comes a humorous, endearing story about a passionate, young scientist who is determined to achieve her goal–no matter what!”



Educational Activities inspired by My Dog Is Not a Scientist:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front cover: 
    • What do you think the title A Dog is NOT a Scientist means?
    • Can you predict what the story might be about based on the cover?
    • What qualities do you think a scientist should have?
    • Why do you think the dog is wearing safety goggles on the cover?
    • What are some ways animals can help humans learn and discover new things?
    • What do you think the dog might try to do in this story?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • What was the main conflict in the story, and how was it resolved?
    • How did the Renzo the dog’s actions lead to humorous situations in the story?
    • In what ways did Renzo help the other characters learn or discover something new?
    • What lesson do you think the author wanted readers to learn from the story?
    • Which part of the story was your favorite, and why?
    • How did the illustrations help to convey the story’s message and enhance the overall reading experience?
    • Were there any moments in the story that surprised you? If so, which ones?
  • Writing–Pretend you are Renzo the dog in the story and write a journal entry about your experience trying to be a scientist. How did it feel when things didn’t go as planned, and what did you learn? Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to illustrate that story, if you choose. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Experimenting–Yara’s a young scientist, and you can be too! With an adult–and maybe a “helper” dog like Renzo–test out any of the following kid-​friendly experiments. 
  • Further ReadingMy Dog Is NOT a Scientist is indeed about science in general and science fairs in specific. Let’s look at some other picture books about those same topics. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

Author Interview: Darshana Khiani

This month’s interview is with Darshana Khiani, a San Francisco Bay area author, engineer, and advocate for South Asian children’s literature. In her own words, she’s “infinitely curious about the world and enjoys sharing my findings with young readers. If I can make a child laugh, even better.”

Darshana has authored a picture book, How to Wear a Sari, and she has two more coming out in 2023. She’s also a South Asian kidlit advocate, helping to spread the word of wonderful new South Asian kidlit books.

In addition to being a wife and a mom to two girls and one dog, she’s also created a wonderful list of Favorite Firsts.

  1. Favorite first friend: Sigrid
  2. Favorite first color: lavender
  3. Favorite first food: pizza and pav bhaji (kind of like a vegetarian sloppy joe)
  4. Favorite first book: Richard Scarry. I still love What Do People Do All Day.
  5. Favorite first subject in school: Math (ironically English was my worst…but I loved creative writing!)
  6. Favorite first song: The Tide is High by Blondie
  7. Favorite first trip: Kenya

What a list, right? Let’s find out even more about Darshana with this interview!


RVC: Fewer than half of the authors I interview are full-​time writers. Where does writing fit into your typical workday?

DK: I am a full-​time engineer working in high-​tech with a family and a dog. So, writing takes places early in the mornings or late at night or anywhere in-​between I can find time.

RVC: How has that relationship changed over the years?

DK: I adjust my writing times around my other responsibilities. When I first started, I would take my writing bag to my kids’ practices or write late at night. Now, I tend to write first thing in the morning and on weekends, sometimes during lunch.

RVC: At what point in your life did you first consider yourself to be a writer? 

DK: Probably a few years in.

RVC: You ran a blog about children’s books for a long time before you got your own debut picture book published. How did that work inform or help your own writing?

DK: The blog, Flowering Minds, was a great way for me to talk about and recommend books which I love to do. I knew that writers had to read voraciously, so why not be a resource and give recommendations along the way? By reading a lot, it helped me focus on writing stories that hadn’t been done before.

RVC: You’re a champion of South Asian kidlit. What’s the latest report on the state of that as of today?

DK: Thank you for asking. I am floored by the number of books coming out every season by South Asian creators. When I started compiling the lists back in 2016, there were less than 5 South Asian picture books those first two years. Now there are at least 5 picture books a season!

In novels, there is such a variety of books from contemporary, historical fiction, fantasy, mystery, and rom-​com. Now all we need is some suspense and horror 😉 and older non-fiction.

RVC: Your debut picture book is a wonderful addition to the world of South Asian kidlit. What’s the story behind How to Wear a Sari?

DK: When I started writing picture books, I wanted to write books for second-​generation South Asians like my two daughters. Books that centered their lives in this country. Books that had universal themes about growing up with a South Asian backdrop and a touch of humor.

In the summer of 2016, I was studying 2nd-​person POV picture books for a different writing project. I love the elegance and sophistication of saris. However, I’m not the best at wearing them. It can take me upwards of 45 minutes to drape one. I started wondering if it’s this hard for me to wear a sari then what would it be like for a young Indian girl. That was the seed for How to Wear a Sari. A sari can be stylish, sophisticated, a symbol of womanhood in South Asian culture much like wearing high-​heels or a long fancy gown is in Western culture.

RVC: Why is the sari so important to South Asian culture?

DK: There are so many varieties of materials, designs, and draping styles. Much of it is unique to the region where the sari was made. It is an expression of identity. Saris span the range from simple cotton ones worn every day while tending house to fancy, elaborate ones for special occasions.

RVC: Back to your book! How to Wear a Sari has an especially resonant ending. At what stage in the drafting process did that emerge?

DK: I knew from the beginning that she was going to run and fall, and that was the original ending. Over the revision process, the fall scene became the climax, and the ending became the spread about getting in trouble with mom. But that left the story on an emotional down note, so I brainstormed possible endings. I came up with the photo album of flops to honor the challenges and spills kids and even adults have when trying new things. I loved it since it felt fresh and brought in another layer to the story.

RVC: As a writer, what was the most valuable lesson you took from this book?

DK: I love the story voice by using a direct narration approach, however, it is a challenge to get character emotion across. Joanne’s artwork is so expressive and was a perfect match for the text.

RVC: You’ve got another picture book coming out in a few weeks. What’s the elevator pitch?

DK: A classroom full of diverse students discusses what it means to be American. They show that in spite of our varied backgrounds and experiences it is our shared American values that bring us together.

RVC: What are you most proud about regarding I’m an American?

DK: That I was able to capture the vision I had on paper. It’s a book for all ages 8 and up. For younger readers, it might be the first time they hear a particular group’s immigration story, while for older readers they might see an event through a new lens. What I hope above all is that readers will look beyond the differences on the surface and realize our shared humanity.

I love Laura’s stunning artwork with layered images.

RVC: Which of Laura Freeman’s illustrations most knocked your socks off?

 

DK: Probably the Somali and Russian Jew spreads. There is no way NOT to be moved by them. I do like the joyous spread of the Pride parade, too.

RVC: Now, you’ve got yet another book coming out later in 2023—Building a Dream: How the Boys of Koh Panyee Became Champions. What’s the most important thing people should know or understand about that?

DK: I loved how the boys faced their environmental and societal challenges with perseverance, hope, and ingenuity.

RVC: In what ways does that book showcase your growth as a writer?

DK: Actually, of my three books, this one was written before the other two. The story I’m an American is my most “recent” story. It’s the first story I ever did with layered text, substantial backmatter, lots and lots of research, and an eye on sensitivity the entire time.

RVC: Let’s move to talking about bigger things. Stylistically speaking, how do you describe your writing?

DK: I have no idea. Maybe my readers know. 😉

RVC: Talk a bit about your writing and revision process.

DK: I hate writing first drafts. I have a really strong left-​brain editor, probably because I’m an engineer, so those first drafts feel near impossible. However, I do love revising except when I have to take a polished story and break it into pieces and start all over–that may actually be harder than writing a first draft. One of my favorite parts of revising is collecting peer feedback and then copying down the notes with different colored pens into various categories and then methodically making the revisions that resonate.

RVC: Tell me about a time where your writing career didn’t go the way you wanted.

DK: I don’t know if there is a specific thing that didn’t work out. The writing journey is a windy one with ups & downs and twists & turns. But I believe everything happens the way it’s supposed to. I did think my writing career would be progressing a little faster. When I started back in 2011, I had no idea it would take seven years before I got my first book deal.

RVC: Since COVID-​19, I try to ask a health and wellness question during each interview. Here’s yours. What do you do to de-stress? 

DK: Eat dark chocolate, go for a walk, talk to my sister, or watch a pick-​me-​up TV show (nothing too serious).

RVC: One final question for this part of the interview. What’s something upcoming that you’re really excited about or really want to promote?

DK: I run a South Asian kidlit quarterly newsletter. I feature the upcoming season’s South Asian kidlit books, picture books through young adult. I have been doing this for nearly eight years. It is wonderful to see the quantity and diversity of stories coming out. Folks can check-​out my South Asian kidlit page to see past lists.

RVC: Alrighty, Darshana. Let’s leap into the LIGHTNING ROUND. The point values are quintupled but we’ve only got sixty seconds. Are you ready?

DK: Fire away!

RVC: What’s the funniest word in the English language?

DK: ugh (no, that’s not the word, my mind is a blank)… hmmm… hullabaloo

RVC: If you could travel back in time, what year would you choose to go to?

DK: Victorian Era.

RVC: Would you rather have a personal chef, a maid, or a masseuse?

DK: You mean I can’t have all there?!?! Okay, a chef since I enjoy eating but not cooking.

RVC: Which author sets the standard for South Asian kidlit?

DK: There are so many talented authors and illustrators that are pushing the boundaries and carving new paths in different ways. The South Asian community is a diaspora spread around the world with varying degrees of commonality and nuanced experiences amongst the sub-groups.

Here are some of the creators I enjoy.

Hari & Deepti’s light box art. Intricate and ethereal! They have done a picture book as well as book covers.

Mitali Perkins, Sabaa Tahir, Samira Ahmed, Rina Singh, Padma Venkatraman, and Rajani LaRocca.

RVC: What’s the best picture book you’ve read in 2022 that deserves a lot more love than it’s gotten?

DK: I recently read The Box by Isabella Paglia and Paolo Proietti and translated by Laura Watkinson. This book was first published Italy and released in English in the U.S. in Jan 2020. I only heard about it recently. It’s sweet and heart-​warming and is all about helping a newcomer and meeting that person where they are and patience.

RVC: What’s your picture book philosophy in five words or fewer?

DK: Follow your curiosity!

RVC: Love it. Thanks so much, Darshana!

Picture Book Review: Busy Feet by Marcia Berneger

Starry Forest Books
14 February 2023
24 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend (and Ringling College of Art and Design Illustration Professor) John Herzog.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

It’s always a bit challenging to review a book with minimal text and eye-​catching art. That’s the situation here with Busy Feet, where a pair of kids go throughout their day with the emphasis being on the range of activities they experience in a kind of Energizer-​bunny fashion. You almost never see their faces to the point that the feet themselves are essentially the main characters. I’ll let John explain the ifs, hows, and whys of the art’s effectiveness below, but I suggest it’s likely due to vibrant colors and a strong sense of motion.

Let’s circle back to the text. The rhymes are purposefully basic and appear to be chosen with a goal of showcasing opposites (hot/​cold, go/​stop, high/​low) to help very young readers learn important words and concepts. To ensure readers notice these common antonyms, they’re always in UPPER CASE lettering in the text.

The book is especially short for a picture book (24 pages versus the standard 32). Was it originally intended to be a board book? I wouldn’t be surprised to learn that, considering the level of text. This feels like a book intended for 2- to 4‑year olds, though kids in the images seem older than that mid- to late-​toddler age. I’m pleased to see that the main two kids/​pairs of feet showcase a biracial friendship, and in the cameos of other kids/​feet, there’s a child in a wheelchair zooming along. For a pretty small cast of characters/​feet, that’s a lot of range.

In the absence of a more defined storyline and with rhyming text this minimal, I prefer to find true rhymes (high/​sky) versus near rhymes (done/​come). Leaning into the accents in addition to being attentive to syllable counts and rhymes often gives subtle oomph to the text, as well.

Still, Busy Feet this has a pleasing read-​aloud quality. And, as John will explain in a moment, the art is sure to appeal. That’s a nice combination. But I wonder–since toddlers buzz through their days in a whirlwind of activity, might we see sequels that showcase other busy toddler body parts? I’m imagining hands and mouths, but surely other options might prove equally intriguing.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

–John’s Review of the Illustrations–

Reading Busy Feet reminded me of this quote from Douglas Horton:

The art of simplicity is a puzzle of complexity.”

Susanna Chapman’s illustrations for Busy Feet exemplifies this beautifully. The colors, patterns, design of the characters and peripheral elements – it all feels so simple, yet there’s a heart of complexity beating here.

Even simpler is the story, written by Marcia Berneger. Typeset in Futura (a Wes Anderson staple) and coupled with the simply complex illustrations, this feels more like a visual tone poem than a picture book. The design choices and visual flourishes give this an almost hallucinogenic feeling, which is exactly what the book needs.

I personally found the story (if it can be called that) somewhat lacking, but perhaps I’m expecting too much. After all, if the story were to be more straightforward, perhaps the balance of the simple story with the complex illustrations would cause it to feel a bit uneven. Nevertheless, I think there were more opportunities for Berneger to explore, especially given that the book takes the point-​of-​view of a little dog following along with the exploits of his child compatriots.

That’s the only weak link, really. On the other hand, the illustrations are incredibly effective and, most importantly, fun. This book is chock-​full of abstraction, interesting perspectives, textures you can really sink your teeth into, and old school printing imperfections – such as misaligned print plates. The style is very retro, which helps to make Busy Feet feel at home in both 1963 and 2023.

I have no doubt that this will end up being one of my favorite books of the year thanks to Chapman’s outstanding illustrations.

4.5 out of 5 crayons


John Herzog is an illustrator and educator. He has created work for Scholastic, Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, Little, Brown and Company, Highlights for Children, DreamWorks TV, and Hasbro. He also teaches illustration at Ringling College of Art and Design.

John is a member of the National Cartoonists Society and the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators, where he received the 2018 SCBWI Magazine Merit Award. He lives in Florida with his family.

John is represented by Kayla Cichello at Upstart Crow Literary.

Editor Interview: Lauri Hornik (Rocky Pond)

This month’s Industry Insider is with Lauri Hornik, President and Publisher at Rocky Pond.

Normally, I write my own super nifty version of an interview subject’s bio with the occasional extra-​helping of literary levity, but I found this one at the Penguin website, and it namedrops so many AWESOME books that I’m just rolling with this.

Lauri began her career as an editorial assistant at Houghton Mifflin Children’s Books in 1988, right after graduating from Harvard. She moved to New York City six years later as Senior Editor at Bantam Doubleday Dell, and then joined Penguin in 1999 as Editorial Director of Dial. In her time at Penguin, she has edited the National Book Award Finalists A River Between Us by Richard Peck and The Rules of Survival by Nancy Werlin; New York Times Bestsellers The Book With No Pictures by B.J. Novak, Counting by 7s by Holly Goldberg Sloan, If I Built a School by Chris Van Dusen, and the Ordinary People Change the World series by Brad Meltzer and Christopher Eliopoulos; Caldecott Honor Book One Cool Friend by Toni Buzzeo and David Small; Coretta Scott King Honor Books How I Discovered Poetry by Marilyn Nelson and The Moon Over Star by Dianna Hutts Aston and Jerry Pinkney; Sydney Taylor Book Award winner Dancing at the Pity Party by Tyler Feder; Boston Globe–Horn Book Honor Books It’s Only Stanley by Jon Agee and The Best Man by Richard Peck; and Sibert Honor Book Turning 15 on the Road to Freedom by Lynda Blackmon Lowery.”

Thank you, Penguin/​Random House website! And whew in terms of accomplishments, right?

Let’s get to know Lauri a bit better now via the interview. Here we go!


RVC: What were some of your earliest-​but-​vital experiences with books?

LH: Ooh, I love this question, because my childhood engagement with books was definitely a sign of what was to come!

When I was eleven and obsessed with Judy Blume’s novels, I wrote her a fan letter in the form of a short story, and she wrote back a personal note in the margins of her printed bio. I still have and cherish that note.

RVC: Lucky you!

LH: I loved reading and writing so much that in middle school I created a story publishing business: I wrote romance stories that I then made copies of and sold at school for a quarter. I was so annoyed when one of my friends would buy the story and share it with everybody else so that I only made 25 cents per story–my first experience of the realities of publishing!

RVC: Oh yeah. I’ve been there–that dreaded secondhand story market in elementary school. I figured I’d make a zillion buckeroonis with my Muppets “Pigs In Space” fanfiction, but it didn’t happen. (True story!) Back to you. At what point did you realize you were going to have a career in the world of stories?

LH: Beside my little business in middle school, you mean?

RVC: Yep!

LH: When I was in college, I spent a few summers editing school publications, including a Let’s Go travel guide. It was great fun and solidified my interest in working in books.

RVC: Your first book-​world gig was as an editorial assistant at Houghton Mifflin Children’s Books. What AHA moments did you have there?

LH: I think the whole first year was one long aha moment. I had thought I’d be working in adult fiction publishing because those were the books I was reading at the time. But the job I found right out of college was in children’s books, and it was an instant fit–a very lucky path to have stumbled upon. I remember talking on the phone to Margret Rey (of Curious George fame) on day one, and also the joy, sometime in that first year, of being able to write the jacket flap copy for Number the Stars. (My mother still has a copy on her bookshelf: It was a big deal in our family.)

RVC: What was one of the most memorable early-​career experiences with editing a picture book?

LH: Some of the illustrated books I remember most dearly are ones in which the author, illustrator, and I took risks with the format. In my early years at Bantam Doubleday Dell, I edited two exquisite and emotional storybooks, Buoy by Bruce Balan and Raúl Colón and Sky Memories by Pat Brisson and Wendell Minor, both of which took the picture book approach to an older reader. Unfortunately, neither really found its audience, but I cherish those books and am glad that we tried something different. I also remember the joy of collaborating with Max Haynes on an interactive picture book called In the Driver’s Seat that put the child behind the steering wheel. It was one of my first picture books as an editor, and such fun to work with Max on it.

RVC: Let’s leap to the present. Rocky Pond. How/​why did it come about, and what makes a Rocky Pond book a Rocky Pond book?

LH: I was the publisher of Dial Books for Young Readers for about twenty years–an extremely satisfying position to have had. But at some point during the pandemic, I realized that I wanted much more time for my own editing rather than supervising a team. There were books that I really wanted to pursue and develop–namely books with mental health content. This had been an interest of mine for quite some time, but I hadn’t had the space to really focus on building the list of mental-​health-​related books that I knew were deeply needed.

So, I launched Rocky Pond Books in the fall of 2022, and the first title published this past January. On the list you’ll find a focus on social-​emotional learning, the mental illness experience, and also some Jewish content. That’s another personal interest of mine, and another subject matter that’s quite needed.

RVC: As President and Publisher, what’s the most difficult aspect of your work?

LH: The most difficult aspect is also one of the best aspects: the juggle of so many different tasks and projects. From the start I’ve loved this career for its variety; there is always a task waiting that suits my current mood, and no two projects are the same experience. But it’s also a career that requires many different skillsets and the ability to keep jumping from one thing to another, and since a publisher works with so many different people (authors, illustrators, agents, colleagues from various teams in the company), there’s also the need to be responsive to whatever your work partners throw at you.

Some days there are more balls in the air than I can keep aloft.

RVC: Describe a typical workday.

LH: My last answer hinted at the reality that there is no typical workday. One day I might spend all of my time line-​editing a novel, the next I might be reading manuscript submissions for two hours, writing online copy for another hour, and then attending meetings the rest of the time (and fitting email into any empty minutes). Some of my favorite meetings are conversations with authors and illustrators and design meetings where I talk through picture book sketches with the art director and the book’s designer. In general, I’m spending lots of time reading or tinkering with words, both those written by authors and those I need to write myself to spread the word about the books.

RVC: In looking at picture books you’ve published over the years, you’ve got some real craftspeople when it comes to language. What are your thoughts on rhyme and some of more formal elements of poetry? 

LH: I’m a fan of rhyming picture books, as long as the rhyme isn’t dictating the story. The story needs to be as well told in rhyme as it would have been in prose, but when an author has that skill, it can be such a delicious read-​aloud experience. And beyond that, I do look for picture book texts that are lyrical or otherwise express a lot of personality through word choice.

RVC: Who are some of the books you’ve edited that showcase rhyme done well?

LH: A few great examples in terms of rhyme are Jon Agee’s It’s Only Stanley and Lisa Wheeler’s Someone Builds the Dream. And for lyricism, it doesn’t get better than The Uncorker of Ocean Bottles by Michelle Cuevas and The Tree in Me by Corinna Luyken.

RVC: Something I’ve noticed about the books you seem to like is that there’s a strong sense of community to them.

LH: Yes, I am always most drawn to books that demonstrate how crucial and sustaining relationships are to one’s life, so children’s books about friendship and family and community are closest to my heart. The Uncorker of Ocean Bottles is about community stepping in for a neighbor who is alone. I’ll soon be publishing Lawrence & Sophia by Doreen Cronin and Brian Cronin, a picture book about an unlikely friendship between a boy and a bird, and how this friendship helps them both contend with anxiety. Charlotte Cheng and Amber Ren’s Night Market Rescue is about finding family. And you’ll definitely keep seeing this focus on my list.

RVC: Let’s help some of the aspiring picture book authors out there. What kinds of things are NOT a great fit at Rocky Pond?

LH: I’m not looking for board book originals and easy-​to-​reads. Books about science and nature will most likely not be a fit. Fairytale retellings will usually not be a fit. And books without any underlying meaning aren’t for me, but I’m also not looking for books in which the message is too overtly therapeutic.

RVC: This isn’t a picture book question, but I have to ask. What was your favorite Richard Peck experience/​story?

LH: Oh, Richard! He taught me so much through the years, and became such a dear friend. I miss him and think about him all the time. Thank you for asking about him. One of my favorite memories is of Richard coming into the office while we were working on The Best Man. He had figured out the final chapter–those perfect three pages. And he sat at my table and read that new chapter aloud to me.

It was one of those rare moments in life–of awe and exhilaration and clarity. I’m very grateful for that memory.

RVC: Richard did a reading here in Sarasota a year or so before he passed. I got to hang out with him a bit after the reading—he was a sweetie. Very generous.

Ryan and Richard!

RVC: One more out-​of-​nowhere question. What’s something most people don’t know about B.J. Novak’s terrific The Book With No Pictures?

LH: B.J. puts so much care and study into his work, and with The Book With No Pictures, the look of the pages was an important part of the reading experience, one that he had thought about extensively before sharing the project with anyone. And so, when it was submitted to me for possible publication, it came as a composition notebook with each designed page attached to the notebook’s blank pages with paper clips. That way it could be read for the very first time in book form. I still have that original version.

RVC: If I asked B.J. what it was like working with you as an editor, what do you think he’ll say?

LH: I like to think he would talk about me and the book’s designer, Lily Malcom, as great collaborators who were willing to try all sorts of ideas before making decisions. We three had an intense and wonderful time working on the book together.

RVC: Last question for this part of the interview. It’s brag time. What should readers be excited about in terms of forthcoming Rocky Pond projects?

LH: I’ve mentioned a few upcoming beauties already, but here are a few more: Daniel Salmieri (the illustrator of Dragons Love Tacos) is the author/​illustrator of a meditative, gorgeous, meaningful book called Before, Now, which uses a spare text of opposites to convey the whole world of one girl’s life, from babyhood to grandma-​hood. Tyler Feder, the creator of Bodies Are Cool, has collaborated with her sister, Cody Feder, on a picture book about a socially anxious ostrich; it’s called Are You Mad at Me?, and it’s so fun while also being so helpful. And Casey W. Robinson and Nancy Whitesides have a touching picture book called Small Things Mended, about a grieving man who finds joy and purpose again with help from the kids in his neighborhood.

RVC: Alrighty, Lauri. It’s time for the SPEED ROUND. Let’s blast through some questions and get zoomy with those answers. Are you ready?

LH: Take it away!

RVC: Which character from The Office do you most admire?

LH: Andy Bernard–he bounces back from disappointments with so much energy and eternal hope.

RVC: If you could travel back in time, what year would you choose to go to?

LH: 2004, to re-​experience my first year as a mom.

RVC: What picture book creature do you wish really existed?

LH: Frog and Toad.

RVC: What are five things we’d see if we peeked in your office?

LH: A bright yellow sofa, various penguin knickknacks, a Newport Folk Festival poster, a can of Diet Coke, a dog bed for my puppy Peach.

RVC: What’s a recent picture book that deserved way more buzz?

LH: I was blown away by Sophie Blackall’s Farmhouseso meaningful, with an art-​creation process like no other. Even though it was acclaimed, I would have like to have seen it get Caldecott notice.

RVC: What’s the best compliment you ever heard about one of the books you edited?

LH: About 20 years ago I edited a picture book called The Sea Chest by Toni Buzzeo and Mary GrandPré, and my young nephew announced that it was his very favorite book. In fact, when he met Toni Buzzeo at a bookstore appearance, he told her, “I re-​read your book before coming here to make sure that it really was my favorite, and it IS!” The best compliment is one that comes from the intended audience!

RVC: Thanks so much, Lauri!