Picture Book Review: Five Five-​Word Reviews

I’ve got the next six months scheduled out with regular co-​written picture book review, but for this month, we’re having another installment of the increasingly (in)famous Five-​W0rd Reviews. Here we go!


Author: Wendelin Van Draanen
Illustrator: Cornelia Li
Knopf Books for Young Readers
16 January 2024
40 pages

Ryan’s five-​word review: Soaring imagination defies gravity’s pull.

4.5 out of 5 Newton’s apples


Author: Aaron Becker
Illustrator: Aaron Becker
Candlewick
12 March 2024
40 pages

Ryan’s five-​word review: Robots rescue animals. Wordless wonder.

4.75 out of 5 lifeboats


Author: Kim Hillyard
Illustrator: Kim Hillyard
Penguin Workshop
30 January 2024
32 pages

Ryan’s five-​word review: Tiny fly dreams big. Audacious.

4.5 out of 5 mountain peaks


Hippo Park
16 January 2024
48 pages

Ryan’s five-​word review: Unlikely bond. Tender girl-​and-​scab story.

4.25 out of 5 boo-boos


Author: Ying Chang Compestine
Illustrator: Crystal Kung
Rocky Pond Books
2 January 2024
40 pages

Ryan’s five-​word review: Flavorful twist on Rapunzel. Palate-pleasing.

4.25 out of 5 tofu cubes

Picture Book Review: José Feeds the World by David Unger, illustrations by Marta Álvarez Miguéns

José Feeds the World
Author: David Unger
Illustrator: Marta Álvarez Miguéns
duopress
30 January 2024
40 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and Ringling College of Art and Design Illustration Professor (and OPB pal) David C. Gardner.

 

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

I’m always interested in the behind-​the-​scenes story of a real-​world hero’s life, and that’s what this book promises to deliver, being pitched this way: “The true story of José Andrés, an award-​winning chef, food activist, and founder of World Central Kitchen, a disaster-​relief organization that uses the power of food to nourish communities after catastrophe strikes.”

To tackle that big task, author David Unger tells the entire trajectory of José’s life, beginning with him as a child who learns to help others after witnessing his parents do that very thing in their jobs as nurses in Spain. They also loved to cook, and the kitchen soon became José’s favorite room in the house. This is where readers begin to get both the flavors of food (“the smell of rice, saffron, chicken, and sausage floating in the air”) and the sound of the Spanish language (cocina, paella, etc.) directly in the text.

José attends a Barcelona cooking school at 15 and becomes a chef’s assistant and a world-​famous restaurant. A few years later, off to the US he went where he cooked in New York City before opening his own restaurant in Washington D.C.  Thanks to his love for food and his skill in cooking, José began earning award after honor after critical acclaim.

That’s the end of a version of this story that simply tells how a young Spanish boy became a food rock star. But that’s not José’s story. Instead, he became deeply affected by the 2010 earthquake that devastated much of Haiti. Just as he did as a child, José wanted to help others. So, he gathered a group of friends and went there to cook for the survivors.

After returning to D.C., José knew he could do more for others who needed help. He founded World Central Kitchen, a nonprofit dedicated to providing free meals to survivors of natural and human-​made disasters in communities all over the world. The story follows his work to support people affected by disasters in Puerto Rico, the Bahamas, and Guatemala, as well as COVID-​related challenges in California, New York City, and the Navajo Nation. There’s even a very brief mention of the Ukranian Food Fighters at the end.

Without a doubt, José is doing amazing work that’s worth knowing about and supporting. The key to making a successful nonfiction picture book biography–or any picture book, for that matter–is to find a way to make the story kidcentric. Why? Because if a kid reader doesn’t love the story enough to ask for re-​readings, it’s a one-​and-​done book regardless of the book’s other merits (such as beautiful art, which is the case here).

I worry that Unger sacrificed too much of the potential emotional depth of the story to portray a more exhaustive recounting of José’s entire life and career, and to put the focus so much on the many efforts of the World Central Kitchen. Another way that might make this book more kidcentric would be to embrace the parts of this story that kids would most likely be drawn to, such as the wonder, magic, and even the sound of food. We have a bit of that at the start, but it gives way to the robust biographical journey that follows.

Directly addressing the reader in the last page (“And one day you, too, will find your calling and make the world a better place”) seems to address the above concern. Does it work? Like the Ukranian mention, it feels more of an afterthought, though I’m pleased the Career Day visuals suggest all kinds of interesting future careers. If it only depicted a chef? That wouldn’t be a hit with most kids, I imagine.

The mission of this story is a very good one, and José Andrés comes across as an admirable humanitarian. There’s a strong sense of a connected world community and a positive sense of diversity here in both the text and the accompanying visuals. I hope this book brings a lot of attention to the World Central Kitchen since that appears to be the main course of this literary meal.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

–David’s Review of the Illustrations–

Spanish illustrator Marta Alvarez Miguéns starts on a sweet note, showing the roots of José’s compassion: as a boy, in the hospital where his parents worked, bringing water to an elderly patient. His love for cooking starts with his mom in the kitchen. He makes paella with his dad.

In a lovely, abstract flight of fantasy, young José floats dreamily over a giant kitchen table, spices, chicken, and utensils arrayed like a fanciful village, reminiscent of Maurice Sendak’s In the Night Kitchen. Miguéns takes flight again later in the book, depicting a grown-​up José filling a steaming pot with vegetables that swirl magically around his head, a magician in the kitchen.

The pictures unfold in travelogue fashion now. José, a teenager, approaches cooking school in Barcelona. He cooks in restaurant jobs in New York and Washington, D.C. In a masterstroke, Miguéns brings the two threads of his life together in a touching double spread: a line in a soup kitchen, each person’s face depicted with care and a poignant dignity as they wait, bundled against the cold.

2010, and José responds to reports of the earthquake in Haiti and flies down to help. An image of local volunteers building rows of sandwiches is especially effective, hundreds of sandwiches laid out in a vast grid. Miguéns is mindful of showing other characters helping José in nearly every picture, suggesting humility in the chef. He is not doing this alone.

Next, it’s off to the Bahamas to help, then Guatemala. COVID appears, along with surgical masks, and Miguéns whisks us to the American Southwest, where José and his team help feed the Navajo nation. From California farm workers to Harlem hospital workers, we land in current-​day Ukraine, where José’s organization enlists locals to feed the broken victims of war.

The world events are grim, but Miguéns’ illustrations are hopeful. Each generous spread unfolds like a bright mural. Her vibrant, colorful illustrations remind me of Mary GrandPré’s fluid, almost abstract handling of the human form. Flat shapes tumble and interlock; steam, smoke, flowers, and plants spill and flow over the pages.

The pictures end on a lovely high note: children dressed up for Career Day. A kid in the center wears a chef’s costume. In a clever move, Miguéns has him wearing a cape and raising a spoon like a sword, or a scepter–a superhero, a knight, or a king.

José comes across as all three.

5 out of 5 crayons


David C. Gardner is an award-​winning illustrator and visual development artist. A former artist for Walt Disney Animation Studios, he has illustrated numerous picture books, including Write On, Irving Berlin! by Leslie Kimmelman (which appeared on OPB in May 2018). Published by Sleeping Bear Press, that book won a 2021 Charlotte Award from the New York State Reading Association. His forthcoming picture book is Junia, The Book Mule of Troublesome Creek, written by New York Times bestselling author Kim Michele Richardson. It follows Junia, the spunky mule from the bestselling The Book Woman of Troublesome Creek series, in a picture book tribute to Kentucky’s Great Depression Pack Horse Library Project. It’s due from Sleeping Bear Press in March 2024. David teaches illustration at Ringling College of Art and Design.

To learn more about David’s own work, please visit FlyingDogStudio.com.

Picture Book Review: I’m Gonna Paint: Ralph Fasanella, Artist of the People by Anne Broyles, illustrated by Victoria Tentler-Krylov

Holiday House
7 November 2023
48 pages
This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

I’m Gonna Paint: Ralph Fasanella, Artist of the People, authored by Anne Broyles and vibrantly illustrated by Victoria Tentler-​Krylov, is a welcome children’s picture book that paints a portrait of Ralph Fasanella’s life with the same fervor and detail the artist himself devoted to his canvases. The book captures Ralph’s journey from a tenacious New York kid to an iconic artist, echoing his dedication to portraying the working-​class experience.

Broyles’ prose dances between simplicity and evocativeness, achieving a balance that engages young readers while touching on mature themes. For instance, in describing Ralph’s early life, Broyles writes, “Ralph often wandered the city until dinnertime, observing the colors, shapes, and textures of the glowing streetlights against the brick buildings. Instead of going to school, he taught himself how to read by studying newspapers on the subway.” Such language not only builds Ralph’s world but also immerses the reader in the symphony of city life that influenced his art.

Tentler-​Krylov’s illustrations must be praised for their dynamism and how they echo Fasanella’s own style—bold, colorful, and brimming with narrative. One can almost feel the texture of the city’s energy in the spread that captures Ralph amidst the clamor and chaos of a labor protest. I’ll let Austin say more about that below in his part.

The narrative deftly weaves Fasanella’s passion for social justice with his artistic development. In a powerful scene, Broyles describes how “It took Ralph three years to create eighteen paintings of workers protesting, union leaders making speeches, militiamen with bayonets, mill owners watching from inside the mills, and more. It was his masterpiece.” This parallel between Ralph’s art and the movement of the American workforce underscores the book’s theme of solidarity and community.

Geared towards children aged 4–8, the book doesn’t shy away from difficult topics like labor rights, instead presenting them through the lens of art and storytelling, making complex concepts a bit more accessible and relatable. The story champions the idea that everyone has the power to create change, aligning with current educational values promoting agency and expression.

In sum, I’m Gonna Paint is an homage to a self-​made artist and a call to recognize the beauty and power in one’s own creativity. It’s a vivid reminder of art’s ability to capture and change the zeitgeist, likely resonating with young readers, educators, and parents for its depth and beauty.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

For an illustrator to tackle a children’s book celebrating the life and work of a recognizable modern artist is no simple undertaking. Especially when the artist in question is a primitive whose primary subject matter is a psychological impression of the world in which he grew up. It means that a lot of the reductionist tools an illustrator might use to simplify, streamline, and evoke the spirit of the book’s hero conflict with the journalistic need to echo the subject’s own sensibility; to represent his world, work, and legacy in a specific and recognizable way.

In short, how was Victoria Tentler-​Krylov supposed to give us a picture book that looked and felt like the world as artist Ralph Fasanella saw it, and pay homage to that interpretation without directly imitating his style? How, indeed, can a reviewer begin to describe the work of one without comparing and contrasting it with the other? It is reviewing an interpretation of an interpretation. And yet, Tentler-​Krylov surmounts this challenge with impressive skill, sensitivity and grace, so I will attempt to follow her example.

As an immigrant son, reform school survivor, and former labor organizer, when Ralph Fasanella became a self-​taught painter later in life, he took a forthright and direct approach to create a visual chronicle of the lived experience of the people and the world that he knew, as well as those of his parent’s generation. He drew heavily on the kinds of visual shorthand any illustrator might use to communicate their ideas. X‑ray projections, flattened perspectives, subjective color, expressive as well as descriptive mark-​making, and panels that guide the eye through a juxtaposition of scale are all visual syntax a picture book illustrator especially might rely upon regardless of the biographical subject.

Unfazed, Tentler-​Krylov supplies many touches of her own that make her vision of Fasanella’s epic world uniquely hers, even as it complements Fasanella’s. Her colors are ever so slightly more naturalistic and objective, her perspective and compositions as grounded as they are whimsical, her focus more sharply moment to moment. Her Van Gogh-​esque, Post-​Impressionist hatching used with even more deliberate intent. Where Fasanella described the timelessness of a specific world, its moments played out cyclically like the thrum of a thousand sewing machines, Tentler-​Krylov gives us specific moments in time surrounding the life of an individual person, and by extension, a hint of the seeds of the artistic vision those experiences would germinate.

Compare the family supper Tentler-​Krylov shows us on page 11 with the one Fasanella painted in 1972. Where Fasanella’s depictions of people were hauntingly expressionless, his architecture shaky and his tone somewhat inscrutable beyond the circumstantial, Tentler-Krylov’s settings crackle with life, her dynamic gestures and characterizations sharpened by the wit of a master cartoonist and observer. We can practically smell the bread on the table. Where Fasanella’s compositions are grand and sprawling, Tentler-Krylov’s are as inventive and immediate as any in the medium without ever letting you forget it’s the life of an artist with a very specific vision she’s depicting. In the hands of a lesser illustrator, intimate vignettes like Fasanella stretching canvas or imagining the world he intends to paint as he contemplates the easel wouldn’t have nearly the power they do here.

And as generationally timely as Fasanella’s work was in his era, Tentler-Krylov’s work in this volume is equally so. Especially powerful is the image of Fasanella as a sixty-​year-​old artist in the 1970s, striding palette in hand through a crowd of striking textile workers in Lawrence Massachusetts circa 1912. Also poignant are the illustrations of modern viewers, swirling in a kind of observational dance around representations of Fasanella paintings. If Fasanella’s work spoke to the power of art to transport a viewer to a time and place and thus keep the lessons of humanity alive, one generation to the next, Tentler-Krylov’s illustrations here do the same. And if Fasanella’s paintings helped in some way to create empathy in viewers for the workers and their families he depicted en masse, Tentler-Krylov’s illustrations create empathy for the scion of a single working family. She shares his tumultuous upbringing with us, and through it the artistic drive, passion, dedication and conscience that gave those workers he championed a voice.

5 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.

Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel, BLAZE ya Dead Homie, a one-​shot comic book, and wrote and illustrated RIOT Force, a creator-​owned comic series for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Reviews: Just Snow Already; Don’t Mean to 13: Molly’s Tuxedo; Remind Me; What Goes on Inside a Beaver Pond?

I ran into an issue with securing a professional illustrator to partner with me this month on a picture book review. This just means we’re going with the much-​ballyhooed 5‑word review format once again here at OPB. Enjoy!

 

Don’t Be Mean to 13
Author: Douglas Harris
Illustrator: YipJar
Label Free Publishing
13 October 2023
24 pages

Five-​word review: Charming take on “unlucky” 13.

4 out of 5 Lucky Charms

 

Just Snow Already!
Author: Howard McWilliam
Illustrator: Howard McWilliam
Flashlight Press
1 September 2023
32 pages

Five-​word review: Snow finally falls. Chaos missed.

4.25 out of 5 Snowballs

 

Molly’s Tuxedo
Author: Vicki Johnson
Illustrator: Gillian Reid
Little Bee Books
27 June 2023
40 pages

Five-​word review: Molly shines in true colors.

4.5 out of 5 Bow Ties

 

Remind Me
Author: Linda Shute
Illustrator: Linda Shute
Neal Porter Books
4 July 2023
32 pages

Five-​word review: Poignant look at memory loss.

4.5 out of 5 Elephants

 

What Goes on Inside a Beaver Pond?
Author: Becky Cushing Gop
Illustrator: Carrie Shryock
Storey Publishing
5 September 2023
48 pages

Five-​word review: Beaver tale marries science, art.

4.25 out of 5 Beaver Dams

Picture Book Review: Giants Are Very Brave People by Florence Parry Heide (illustrated by Merrill Rainey)

Holiday House
1 August 2023
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and freelance illustrator Edna Cabcabin Moran.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

While I was familiar with Florence Parry Heide (1919–2011), the author of over 100 children’s books, I initially didn’t realize that this was a new edition of a 50-​year-​old work. Realizing that situation now actually answers some of my questions about the book, which are likely a result of audiences being so different a half century ago.

Back to the book, though.…

This is the story of a blue-​skinned child named Bigelow. To put it plainly, he’s absolutely a total scaredy-catkid. The clouds could fall on him, after all. And alphabet soup could spell out a magic word that kapoofs him into a mushroom. And rain? Well, of course he’s afraid of rain. Because he might melt.

One day, he goes out for a walk and encounters a very small woman (Mrs. Pimberly) who’s afraid of him because to her, he’s huge. She suggests that he might be less afraid if he acted a bit more fierce–perhaps by giving “a giant short of shout” such as FEE FI FO FUM. While it seems as if Bigelow is the first giant she’s encountered, she says that all giants know that phrase.

Bigelow practices the shout repeatedly while Mrs. Pimberly brews some tea. When she comes out with the tea, Bigelow is LOUD, to which she says, “You certainly scared me. That’s a very good shout. I’m sure it will make you feel much, much braver.”

All that shouting made him hungry, so Mrs. Pimberly makes him a mountain of pancakes (large to her, small to him). After he’s had the tiny snack, he offers to take her home with him, but she declines, saying that she has never traveled or had many experiences. “I’ve never even been on a train,” she says.

Back at home, Bigelow uses FEE FI FO FUM to deal with two of his fears–alphabet soup and bathtime. Maybe acting brave does help someone feel a little braver after all! The kid giant returns the favor to Mrs. Pimberly by bringing her his toy train, which allows her to ride “round and round and round the track.” While it’s unclear how riding a toy train equates to exploring the world, Mrs. Pimberly appears genuinely thrilled with the experience.

Ultimately, I have questions about the story. While children are likely to love shouting FEE FI FO FUM with Bigelow, will they feel less excited that an adult solved/​helped solve Bigelow’s problem (being afraid)? Most contemporary picture books give far more agency to kids in stories. I also wonder how a child who is afraid of everything manages to summon courage to go on long walks away from the safety from home.

Yet Rainey’s graphite pencil and digital illustrations are quite charming, as Edna will explain below. I’ve already mentioned the read-​aloud-​ability of parts of this book, and I’m also charmed by how some readers might not realize how Bigelow is a kid giant until he does himself (which is when he meets Mrs. Pimberly). There’s also a sincerity to the text that still comes through even after 50 years.

All things considered, it’s worthy of a read and an after-​book discussion about courage and fear. Great job, Merrill Rainey!

4 out of 5 pencils


–Edna’s Review of the Illustrations–

Merrill Rainey’s digital illustrations in Giants Are Very Brave People bring a freshness and verve to a bygone storytelling style by late bestselling author, Florence Parry Heide. In contrast with the story’s ambling quality, the art is direct and charming as metrical compositions of richly layered pages. Colors and textures sing. Shape and line work dance. Negative space places the main character, Bigelow, center stage in coping with his exhaustive list of fears.

Bigelow ventures (accidentally) into a place outside his fears as Rainey’s colorful artwork starts to fill the pages. Full and half-​page compositions take Bigelow and readers onto different vantage points [see pages 5 and 7] where he literally and metaphorically  gets a new perspective on things.

He meets Mrs. Pimberly who, in spite of her fear (of giants) begins to befriend Bigelow. She breaks the news to Bigelow that he is a giant and gives advice on how to behave like one. Rainey presents a visual metaphor of Bigelow finding his own voice as a giant. As Bigelow practices his Fee Fi Fo Fum chant [pages 10–11], spot illustrations move across the page spread like musical notes building up to a gigantic crescendo.

A turn to page 12 features a blue person hiding behind a door. It’s not clear right away that this is Mrs. Pimberly as she is painted in flesh tone in the rest of the book. On closer inspection of the text and visuals such as glasses, hairstyle and polka-​dot blouse, we realize this blue character is Mrs. Pimberly after all. Whether or not this is an intentional color change is unclear. Taking small pause, however, in a book that tackles the big theme of fear does not detract from the exuberance of Rainey’s tight but loosely rendered, playful yet rigorous artwork.

The scene on pages 30–31, featuring Mrs. Pimberly riding the train that Bigelow set up, is sure to be a favorite among readers. Rainey’s composition of color, shape, line, texture, and expressive animate and inanimate things, result in a tour de force for this picture book. We are not only treated to a visual symphony that resonates with an old-​timey tale of Bigelow and Mrs. Pimberly, but we are shown how to be brave in the new millennia.

4.75 out of 5 crayons


Edna Cabcabin Moran is an author/​illustrator, multi-​disciplined artist, educator, and advocate for youth voices and diversity in publishing. A Filipina-​American born to immigrants and raised in a military family, Edna grew up in the USA’s east and west coasts, Iceland, and Hawai’i. She is also a dancer with acclaimed hālau hula and dance company, Nā Lei Hulu I Ka Wēkiu, and a teaching artist specializing in STEAM and integrative arts. Her latest picture book, Honu and Moa (BeachHouse Publishing), received a 2019 Aesop Accolade from the American Folklore Society.

https://kidlitedna.com

IG & Twitter: @kidlitedna

Picture Book Reviews: Here I Can Be Mindful (Ally Condie); Oh No, the Aunts Are Here (Adam Rex); Stinkbird Has a Superpower (Jill Esbaum); Weather Together (Jessie Sima); When You Can Swim (Jack Wong)

Things went sideways at OPB this month, so instead of offering a normal picture book review where I write about the story and a pro illustrator writes about the art, we’re going a different route this time. We’re doing five-​word reviews for five picture books.

If you like this zippy new format, maybe we’ll try it again from time to time.

 

Here I Can Be Mindful
Author: Ally Condie
Illustrator: Jamie Kim
Viking Books for Young Readers
2 May 2023
32 pages

Five-​word review: Peaceful voyage through mindful awareness.

4.25 out of 5 Zen koans


Oh No, the Aunts Are Here
Author: Adam Rex
Illustrator: Lian Cho
Chronicle Books
23 May 2023
40 pages

Five-​word review: Boisterous, loving family reunion tale.
4.25 out of 5 family photos

Stinkbird Has a Superpower
Author: Jill Esbaum
Illustrator: Bob Shea
G.P. Putnam’s Sons Books for Young Readers
16 May 2023
32 pages

Five-​word review: Unique charm amid stinky adventures.

4.25 out of 5 stink waves


Weather Together (Not Quite Narwhal and Friends)
Author: Jessie Sima
Illustrator: Jessie Sima
Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers
2 May 2023
56 pages

Five-​word review: Unicorns explore emotional weather together.

4.75 out of 5 rainbow swirls


When You Can Swim
Author: Jack Wong
Illustrator: Jack Wong
Orchard Books
2 May 2023
48 pages

Five-​word review: Diverse, empowering, aquatic joy ride.

4.5 out of 5 diving boards