Educational Activities: I Am Today by Matt Forrest Esenwine

I Am Today
Author: Matt Forrest Esenwine
Illustrator: Patricia Pessoa
1 March 2022
POW! Kids Books
36 pages

**While OPB generally chooses fairly new picture books to feature in our monthly Education Activities section, sometimes an older picture book grabs our attention. That’s what happened this week with Matt’s I Am Today, which was published a year ago.**

 

Book description from Goodreads: “A young girl realizes that she doesn’t have to wait until she’s grown-​up to stand up for what is right and make a big impact.

While playing on the beach in her coastal town, a young girl comes across a sea turtle ensnared by a wire. Her town is home to a factory that has provided jobs for many of her neighbors, including her mother, but it has also been dumping garbage from a pipe into the waters, threatening the creatures that live in them.

Children are used to being asked what they’ll do and be when they grow up, but the girl knows there is so much she can do today to help. Unable to forget the sight of the struggling turtle, with a fantastic act she inspires the townspeople to compel the factory to change its destructive ways.

Written in spare and evocative poetry, I Am Today is an empowering story for children who want to be the change the world needs.”


Educational Activities inspired by I Am Today:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front cover: 
    • What do you think this book will be about?
    • Where and when is this story taking place?
    • How do you think this story is going to end?
    • Who do you think the main character is? What do you think they might be like?
    • What are you looking forward to learning or discovering in the book?
    • Have you read any other books by the same author or illustrator? If so, what did you like about them?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • What does it mean for someone to be Today?
    • What does it mean for someone to be the Future?
    • In your mind, which of the child’s activities to save the turtle was most effective? 
      • What else might YOU have done to save turtles?
    • What did you think of the book’s ending?
    • What do you believe is the main message of the story?
    • Which picture did you like the most? Why?
    • Did you enjoy this book? Why/​why not?
  • Drawing–What’s interesting about I Am Today is that the turtle-​saving story occurs entirely in the pictures and not in the words. What’s another animal-​saving story that could happen in the background of these pages and this book-​length poem? Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to create that story. Feel free to show that story in one piece of art or spread it out over many pages. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Crafting–The girl in this story clearly likes turtles, and so does OPB. After you’ve tried out the cool origami turtle activity in the back of the book, return here to test out these fun turtle crafts. As always, get an adult to help! 
  • Further ReadingI Am Today is about a child who makes an important change in the lives of others. Here are picture books about people who made similarly meaningful changes through awareness, kindness, and–perhaps most vital–taking action. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

 

 

Author/​Illustrator Interview: Bonnie Kelso

This month’s Author/​Illustrator Interview is with Bonnie Kelso. I already know her because she’s coauthored picture book reviews right here at OPB, and we’re currently in a picture book PR group together.

A self-​proclaimed “seeker of truth and cuteness,” Bonnie serves as the SCBWI Nevada Illustrator Coördinator and has authored several picture, activity, and coloring books, including an April 2023 picture book release, Nudi Gill: Poison Powerhouse of the Sea.

Bonnie’s an avid outdoors enthusiast and can often be found wandering about the desert with her family in Las Vegas, NV. She also says she’s traveled around the world twice!

That’s it–I can’t wait. I need to find out more about Bonnie right now. Let’s get to the interview.


RVC: What aspect/​part of you today gives away where you’re from and how you were raised?

BK: Wow, Ryan! That’s a loaded first question!

RVC: Absolutely. Loaded like the best type of baked potato!

BK: Okay, getting introspective here…

My parents always encouraged me to choose work that was fun. They knew that success is measured by how excited you are to wake up every day to do your thing. When the joy is gone, you’re not doing anyone any favors by trudging along. That’s when it’s time to pivot.

RVC: Great start. Now, what was that childhood moment that in retrospect was the AHA moment that led to your kidlit career?

BK: I always loved to draw and write stories. I used to make little drawings and sell them to my parents. I even started selling them on the school bus. Here’s a sample of one of my early art sales.

RVC: WOOF! You earned a BFA in Fine Art at the Rhode Island School of Design. What was the plan with that degree?

BK: Haha! Is there ever a plan with a degree in Art?

RVC: One hopes!

BK: I think the plan was to figure out a way to make a living doing something I loved to do. Somehow, I’ve managed to do that, but I’ve definitely learned how to live on a budget. Luckily, I’ve always valued creative time over fancy things.

RVC: Your press kit bio says you’re a “former museum exhibit designer turned children’s book author and illustrator.” How did that happen?

BK: So, my first job out of art school was packing staples in a factory. I don’t recommend it. A lot of my co-​workers developed carpal tunnel syndrome pretty quickly. I couldn’t let that happen to me, because I needed dexterity to draw and paint. My dad had a friend who worked at an exhibit design company in Lorton, Virginia. I met with the Design Director, and he decided to give me a chance as a paid intern. I loved that job! I ended up working in exhibits for 12 years. I even became the Design Director.

But then, something shifted in me. I felt like I wasn’t living enough. I wanted to travel and experience more of the world. So, I sold my condo and used the proceeds to start traveling. I went around the world twice, backpacking and taking adventure-​style tours. I’ve been to 40 countries!

RVC: Consider me impressed.

BK: After that, I landed in Las Vegas where my parents live and started a family. Being a mom reminded me of my childhood dream to write and illustrate books for children. In 2017, I started pursuing it seriously, joined SCBWI, and voila! That’s kind of how I’ve always approached my life journey. I ask myself, what do I want to experience next? Then I figure out how to make it happen.

RVC: If it works, it works.

BK: You bet.

RVC: Your first author/​illustrator picture book is Nudi Gill. What’s the story behind that story?

Early sketch of Nudi!

BK: The story behind Nudi Gill begins with my fascination with the ocean and everything in it. I remember growing up in Florida and combing the beach with my grandmother for “critters.” I was, and still am, fascinated with strange animal body shapes and behaviors. The first time I encountered a nudibranch was on a dive in New Zealand. It was love at first sight. The sea slug was bright blue with yellow stripes, just like Gill. Something in my heart reacts to these fierce little creatures. They are so small and live in such an enormous and sometimes hostile environment, yet they somehow find a way to thrive. I think a lot of kids can relate to that.

Bonnie’s photo of a nudibranch!

RVC: What was the most important lesson that book taught you?

BK: It taught me that you have to make stories about what you care about. Pick subjects that you feel passionate about and really understand why you feel the way you do about them.

RVC: For this book, you’re working with a small publisher—Gnome Road Publishing. What’s the experience been like?

BK: Amazing. GRP gives each of their titles equal attention. The brain and heart behind the gnomes is Sandra Sutter. She is one smart cookie. I’ve learned so much about the industry from her. I highly recommend that writers and illustrators submit their work to GRP if they get the chance.

RVC: For those who are intrigued by the Sandra Sutter shout-​out, I’ll add this: she describes herself as “a mom, crazy cat lady, and a fan of kind people.” She sounds delightful! But back to you, Bonnie. Describe your process for creating a book where you’re both author and illustrator.

BK: I usually start with a character sketch. I play around with some story ideas. Once I find a good hook, I might blurt out a first draft. This usually comes to me fast and furiously. Then, I tuck it away for a while. I have a lot of shelved stories. The one that keeps popping into my head over and over is the one I take to the next level. I run it by my critique groups until I feel like it’s ready for the next exciting phase: the down and dirty dummy. Then, the real work starts as I mold a pile of scraps and scribbles into something that resembles a presentable book idea. If it sells, that’s awesome! Now I get to fine tune it, bring it to life with full renderings, and send it off to print. Letting go at that point is both satisfying and terrifying.

RVC: How does that process differ from an illustrator-​only role, as you have with the forthcoming picture book by Heather Kinser, In a Cave?

BK: Oh, yes, In a Cave. I feel dreamy just thinking about it. I’m so lucky that I got to have the experience of illustrating a manuscript that I adore about a topic that I love. When I read Heather’s words, I could see pictures right away in my mind. I was pulling from all the caves I’ve been to before, snatching details from each. I think when the writing is that good, the illustration comes very naturally.

RVC: How do your art skills inform your writing?

BK: When I’m writing, I’m always thinking, “Can I draw this?”

RVC: How do your writing skills inform your art?

BK: When I’m drawing, I’m always thinking, “What is this story really about?”

RVC: You’re a teaching artist on the Nevada Arts Council Roster for Schools and Communities. What do you like most about teaching art to children? 

BK: My favorite thing about teaching art to children is helping them see the beauty in whatever they create. I do this with my adult students, too. I think a lot of people stop drawing because they are dissatisfied with their end product. I try to show them that the real joy is in the process of creating.

RVC: You’re also deeply involved with SCBWI. How has that organization helped you get to where you are today?

BK: Yes, I’m the Illustrator Coördinator of the Nevada region. SCBWI connected me with the kidlit community when I was wanting to be something I wasn’t yet. They really showed me a pathway to publishing through workshops, critique groups, and other resources. I think winning the Karen Cushman Award in 2021 also helped me get some extra attention from agents.

RVC: Congrats on that! What else has been especially helpful in terms of your kidlit career path?

BK: Great follow-​up question! I was just about to add that Mindy Alyse Weiss is who I credit for finding my agent. Her #PBParty event is spectacular and has led so many people to publishing success. Thank you, Mindy!

I also want to thank all of my wonderful critique partners. If you don’t have a critique group, you’re shooting yourself in the foot.

RVC: Amen to that! Who or what has most influenced you as a creative?

BK: Mother Nature. I could list a whole bunch of people, too, but MN is always way up there above the rest.

RVC: In 2017, you self-​published I Am Shaylee Seakin: Speaking My Truth. What advice do you have for those who are considering self-publishing?

BK: I love the freedom of the self-​publishing world. My self-​published work is usually stuff that doesn’t fall into a specific trade genre.

Shaylee is actually an activity book. I’ve also self-​published several coloring books and workbooks. I plan to self-​publish more books that aren’t well suited to the trade or educational market. Luckily, my agent is cool with that. I do it because I know there is someone out there who needs to hear what I’m saying. I’m not in it for the money, but rather for the sharing of creative ideas. If you want to be successful financially as an indie publisher, you have to run it like a business and really market yourself.

RVC: Any tips on how to self-​publish better/​more effectively?

BK: Darcy Pattison runs a great class on self-​publishing that I highly recommend.

RVC: How much did having a self-​published book help you land an agent?

BK: I don’t think it helped me land an agent at all. I don’t believe that it hurt my chances either. Most agents are not even aware of anything in the self-​publishing realm. They will most likely be assessing your work through your current submissions to them, not from your list of previously self-​published work.

RVC: Did you talk about your self-​published work when you were submitting?

BK: No, I never mentioned my self-​published work when querying.

RVC: You’re now repped by Liz Nealon at Great Dog Literary. What’s the single best thing about Liz?

BK: There is no single thing. Everything about the LIZ is incredible. She is smart, savvy, honest, caring, experienced, and a genuinely kind person.

RVC: What would Liz say is the single best thing about you?

BK: I listen.

RVC: What are the odds that you can get Liz to do an Industry Insider with OPB in 2023?

BK: I can ask her. She really does love to be helpful to the kidlit community.

RVC: Yippy skippy! Now, how involved is your family in your kidlit career? Are they beta readers, idea generators, feed-​the-​tortoiseshell-​cat-​helpers-​so-​you-​can-​work people? 

BK: Yes, yes, and yes. It’s definitely a plus to be in proximity to young people on a regular basis when creating kidlit. The tortoiseshell cat on the other hand, does not help at all. I especially do not appreciate her fondness for chewing on expensive electrical cords.

RVC: Cats do that–confirmed. One final question for this part of the interview. Beyond the second Gnome Road picture book that comes out in 2024 (Sea Smiles), what’s next for you? What else are you working on?

BK: I’ve got a few things on submission right now through Great Dog Lit. We’re also developing a new STEM graphic novel series that I think will be so much fun to work on. I’m also working on a side project related to Nudi Gill that will probably hit Kickstarter this summer.

RVC: Good luck with that, Bonnie. But now it’s time for the much ballyhooed and never equaled LIGHTNING ROUND. Zingy zappy questions and powerful pithy answers, please. Are you ready?

BK: Let’s goooooooo!

RVC: If you could only have one app on your phone, it’d be…

BK: Alien Shooter. It has saved my kids from total meltdowns at the doctor’s office numerous times.

RVC: Which animal would be cutest if it were scaled down to the size of a hamster?

BK: Hard to choose, but I think I’ll go with sloth.

No…

Panda?

Nope.

Koala!

Final answer.

RVC: Favorite Crayola color? (Bonus points if it doesn’t currently exist!)

BK: Tortoiseshell.

RVC: Since you’ve traveled the entire world twice, what’s the most inspirational, creativity-​inducing place?

BK: The Pacific Ocean.

RVC: Who sets the standard for the type of author/​illustrator books you want to create?

BK: Ashley Spires.

RVC: What’s the best thing a child ever said to you about your art?

BK: “I wish could eat that.”

RVC: Bonnie, this was a hoot. Thanks so much!

Picture Book Review: Bear Is Never Alone by Marc Veerkamp

Author: Marc Veerkamp
Translator: Laura Watkinson
Illustrator: Jeska Verstegen
Eerdmans Books for Young Readers
4 April 2023
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and Florida-​based freelance illustrator Gladys Jose.

 

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

Veerkamp’s English-​language debut (which Laura Watkinson translated from the Dutch original) in an interesting one. Here’s the story.

From page one, everyone in the forest knows that Bear’s piano playing is magnificent. The forest creatures crowd around to hear every delicious note. So good!

Suddenly, there’s a YAAAAAWWWWWNNNN!

Who’d be so rude as to interrupt this wonderful concert? Not Monkey. Not Squirrel. Not Turtle.

Was it…Bear?

Yep, Bear is done with music for now and simply wants a break. He just wants to be alone, though that’s a real problem because the others aren’t okay with it. The way the animals stalk him and insist on more music–like he owes it to them!–seems to be vaguely reminiscent of how paparazzi swarms celebrities and expect them to deliver 247.

Eventually, Bear shakes his pursuers and ends up alone. Or so Bear thinks. But look–Zebra is nearby (and I can’t help but note how Zebra’s stripes are newsprint–so cool). Zebra’s not pushy or demanding, though. In fact, Zebra wants to do something in return for Bear playing such beautiful music. Zebra offers to read Bear a story.

No way, decides Bear because all he wants is to be left alone. But…being told a story is pretty good. Is there somehow a way for both animals to get what they want?

I won’t spoil the final spread, but it’s a cute, satisfying moment.

Introverted readers will see themselves in how powerfully Bears years for silence and solitude. Others who perhaps aren’t as attuned to that angle will likely see this as a story about respecting boundaries or showing kindness.

Regardless of how apparent the social-​emotional lessons are to readers, this simple story with captivating art is thoughtful and welcome. I look forward to seeing more of Veerkamp’s work being translated into English.

4.5 out of 5 pencils

 

–Gladys’ Review of the Illustrations–

The art for Bear Is Never Alone is absolutely stunning!

The illustrations for this book are rendered in brilliant silhouetted black and white figures and shapes, with a bold red color for small details. The use of negative space was used so thoughtfully throughout. It’s the type of art readers will want to take time and look through slowly, as there are little details hidden throughout. In some places the negative space is actually other imagery, another animal, or elements of the forest.

The lone zebra character’s “stripes” being text is a creative and lovely touch, tying in to the book that they were hoping to comfort bear with–the same way that the bear’s solid bold silhouette mimics the grand piano.

I appreciate how the lone zebra was actually introduced from the start of the book, but never mentioned through the text and you could see he was different than the other animals and would play a bigger role eventually.

In conclusion, I thoroughly enjoyed this picture book. Both the words and art were lovely! It’s definitely a book worth having on your shelf and worthy of re-reads.

5 out of 5 crayons


Gladys Jose is an illustrator and storyteller. She graduated from the University of Central Florida in 2012, where she earned a Bachelor of Fine Arts degree, specializing in graphic design. She’s the illustrator of the Fresh Princess series (HarperCollins), The Elephants’ Guide to Hide-​and-​Seek (Sourcebooks), and Clayton Parker Really Really REALLY Has to Pee (Abrams), as well as other upcoming books.
She lives in the sunny state of Florida with her supportive loving husband, energetic brilliant daughter, and a very sweet pup named Miles.

Agent Interview: Jennifer Rofé (Andrea Brown Literary Agency)

Help me welcome this month’s Industry Insider guest, Jennifer Rofé, a senior agent at Andrea Brown Literary Agency! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!!

As much as I truly enjoy creating snarky biographical introductions for OPB guests, when I see something great that someone else created, I must acknowledge it. Given that, here’s Jennifer’s fantabulous Twitter bio.

Children’s lit agent with @AndreaBrownLit who dreams about being a bakery-​owning cowgirl. Never mind that I don’t bake or have a horse. (she/​her)”

Wow, right? [Making a note to improve my own social media bios in light of seeing this one!] 

And since it’s been a few months since we’ve done a Fun Facts section and I miss their pithy biographical goodness, we’re going to finish this introduction with a “7 Fun Facts about Jennifer” list. Here goes!

  • My first job was writing for a wine trade magazine, and they hired me because I knew nothing about wine. I didn’t even know what Merlot was.
  • My favorite color is yellow.
  • My favorite band is, and always has been, and always will be, the Indigo Girls.
  • My comfort meal is white rice with a fried egg and plátanos.
  • Things I love? “Troublemakers,” sass, underdogs, talking animals, and magic.
  • I am good at dream interpretation.
  • I love hidden passages and secret rooms. One day, I will have a house with both.

Thanks so much for that, Jennifer. Now let’s all zip ahead to the interview and uncover a bit more of the elusive recipe for how a literary agent superstar is made!


RVC: Whenever I have a name question, I now ask it aloud instead of quietly wondering about it in silent semi-​embarrassment. It’s a 2023 resolution of mine! So, here come two questions. 

1) Do you prefer Jen or Jennifer? 

Formally, like for work announcements, I go by Jennifer. But in life, I prefer Jen. So please call me Jen.

2) How do you say your last name?

JR: Row-fay. The accent on the e makes it a hard “a.”

RVC: Gotcha. Thanks for that! Now, you earned a BA in English with a minor in Social and Ethnic Relations from UC Davis. What was the intended career plan with that?

JR: Hahahahaha! I have no idea what the intended career plan was. As I was in line graduating college, I realized that I maybe should have studied Classics and Business. But it all worked out. Seems like it was a bit of a winding road, but in hindsight, I can see how I was getting here all along.  

RVC: You worked as a middle grade teacher for five years. What was the best thing(s) about that time in your life?

JR: Those kids were the best. Except for one class that drove me to drink spiked hot tea in the bathtub!

RVC: Oh, I’ve been there, too.

JR: I always appreciated the kids who other teachers didn’t like.

  • The “troublemaker” who was actually very intelligent. (I’m certain this kid is now either an entrepreneur or a criminal.)
  • The kid who came from a family of underperforming students and so the same was expected of him, but he was very smart. (I helped this child get into a private high school.)
  • The kid who brought a water squirter to school and stood behind a post to spray friends during the passing period. (On the inside, I was laughing, but I had to pretend to be mad.)

Being in middle school can be hard, but there’s something about that time that is a magical twilight.

RVC: What was your teaching superpower?

JR: I was good at bringing the low-​performing students to level, and the principal started intentionally giving me those students. I loved working with those kids, and I really didn’t do anything different with them than I did with my more achieving students. I knew they could get it done and I treated them accordingly.

RVC: What convinced you to make the move from teaching to agenting?

JR: I long knew that I wanted to do something pertaining to children’s media. I thought maybe cartoons, but then I had a summer internship at Disney and it was miserable. Then I thought maybe educational publishing, so perhaps I should become a teacher first, which I did. I also always liked kidlit, and I would wander the bookstores perusing the children’s section, but working in traditional publishing never occurred to me.

Then one day, the office admin at the school where I was working asked what I was doing over the weekend, and I told her I’d probably go to Borders (a blast from the past!) at some point to look at books. She said I should go to Book Passage instead, which is a fantastic indie bookstore in the Bay Area, where I had been living at the time. When I got back to school Monday morning, she had put in my box the monthly newsletter from Book Passage. I noticed that they offered workshops, and there was an upcoming one on children’s literature. Lemony Snicket, Megan McDonald, and an editor from Chronicle were presenting. And so was Literary Agent Andrea Brown.

I remember thinking, What’s a literary agent?

I signed up for the conference–which was a lot of money for me at the time–just to find out what a literary agent is. On the last day of the conference, Andrea presented, and I thought, That’s what I’m going to do. I approached her after and asked how I get her job. And here I am.

RVC: Wow!

JR: That office admin has no idea how she changed my life.

RVC: Who was the first client you signed? 

JR: The first client I signed on my own, in 2006, was Meg Medina, for her first book Milagros: The Girl from Away.

RVC: What was the tipping point with that book? What moved you to an “I’m taking it!” decision?

JR: The tipping point happened very quickly–on page 1. And that’s because even though Meg was writing about a fictional island, I could tell immediately that it was influenced by Cuba. My mom was born and raised in Cuba until her family fled the country, and I recognized Cuba from stories I had been told. In fact, if I recall correctly, I believe one of the first things I said to Meg when we spoke was, “You’re writing about Cuba, aren’t you?”

RVC: It’s clear that you’re deeply invested and interested in identity both from the projects you rep and how you represent yourself in the world.

JR: What most interests me about identity is how we’re perceived versus who we know ourselves to be or who we can become, and how that intersects. For instance, when Stranger Things came out, Joyce was my favorite character. She was perceived as a crazy, kooky lady, but she was right all along, and that nobody listened to her didn’t stop her from doing everything to save her son. Eventually, everybody got on board with Joyce.

In story, I am most interested in the character who is misunderstood, underestimated, overlooked. Even the students I appreciated the most when I was teaching were the ones who were underestimated.

RVC: What do you think is the most common misconception people have about the intersection of identity and writing?

JR: No identity is a monolith.

For instance, I’m half Cuban. Some would assume that I’m Catholic or that my mom’s family went to Miami after fleeing. Neither is true. We’re Cuban Jews, and my mom’s family ended up in Los Angeles.

The nuances of identity are infinite.

RVC: Let’s help writers by digging into industry specifics. Some agencies pass around queries/​manuscripts. How often does that happen at ABLA (the cool acronym for the Andrea Brown Literary Agency)?

JR: Every day.

RVC: What’s something most people don’t know about ABLA

JR: I don’t know if people really understand how collaborative we are. I talk with my colleagues every day, we help each other every day, and our hive-​mind approach has made us a strong, dynamic agency.

RVC: If I asked your ABLA colleagues what your agenting superpower is, what might they say?

JR: My in-​house nickname is Bonus Queen. I’m good at getting creative bonus language in contracts. And it’s so satisfying when those bonuses come through and clients earn additional money.

RVC: What’s your ACTUAL agenting superpower?

JR: When it comes to writers, I’d like to think I’m good at asking the questions that encourage them to pinpoint precisely what they’re trying to accomplish or say with a story. When it comes to illustrators, I’m good at spotting potential in the unexpected. For example, I came across the work of a fine artist whose style I thought would translate to picture books. And we very quickly landed her a picture book.

RVC: What trends is ABLA seeing in terms of picture book submissions?

JR: In terms of submissions we receive, we’re recently seeing texts about gardens, food, identity, and Christmas. There’s also been an uptick in stories that take place outside of a contemporary world–fantasy-esque, I guess you could say.

 RVC: I have two words for you. Big + Sur. 

JR: One of my favorite weekends of the year. ABLA runs the Big Sur Writers Workshops in Big Sur, CA, and Cape Cod, MA. Imagine being surrounded by fellow writers in clean, coastal air, workshopping your manuscript with small groups that are led by conference faculty, going away to revise for hours, strolling the redwoods or the sand to think, attending craft sessions from faculty, dining with colleagues. It’s a magical weekend.

 RVC: What’s a success story that emerged out of Big Sur?

JR: We have several Big Sur success stories–writers or illustrators who have joined ABLA or who have found other agencies and have gone on to get published. Two current successes that come to mind are Eric Rosswood, whose picture book Strong recently won the Stonewall Honor, and Angela Joy, whose picture book Choosing Brave has earned an impressive list of accolades, including most recently a Caldecott Honor.

RVC: You’re known for your The “So What?” Factor presentation.

JR: “So What?” started when I was teaching eighth graders essay writing. If Kayla stated that plastic bottles are polluting our oceans, her next sentences had to explain the “So What?” of this statement. This matters because…. And so on. At some point, I realized that I could do this with clients. If a plot point happens in the story, then there needs to be a “So What?” of that moment.

RVC: Why do you think the presentation is so popular? 

JR: I think this presentation became popular because it’s a simple way to think about how you’re moving your story forward. If X happens, then Y. And if you can’t figure out the Y, then rethink the X. Applying this to TV shows and movies is a great way to get the hang of it. Dirty Dancing is an excellent “So What?” vehicle. Johnny is accused of stealing wallets.

  • So What? Baby knows he couldn’t have stolen the wallets because she was with him all night.
  • So What? Protecting Johnny will mean that everybody learns what Baby has been hiding, including her parents.
  • So What? Their perception of her is going to be shattered.
  • So What? Well, lots of things, including that Baby needs that to happen so that she can come into herself as an independent young woman. Also, the dad is going to face his own biases and limitations. Everything that happens in that movie matters and moves the plot forward.

I haven’t entirely pinpointed how to do this with picture book texts because there is variation in the format. It can still generally apply, like with a more narrative structure, but concept books, for instance, might not have a “So What?” I believe I first started “So What?” as an agent with Mike Boldt! When he shares a new idea with me now, he often comes prepared with the “So What?” on hand.

RVC: What’s your best tip for ensuring the “So What?” game stays generative and supportive?

JR: You can certainly “So What?” your manuscript into oblivion. The core of it is understanding how each of your plot points moves the story forward and impacts your characters in a way that matters to the story.

RVC: How often do you participate in other workshops/​conferences?

JR: I mostly participate in SCBWI conferences, but I took a break after having my second child four years ago. Then COVID happened. But I’m slowly starting to do more conferences again. I enjoy them. They satisfy the teacher in me.

RVC: You’re an author, too. How did Piggies in the Pumpkin Patch come about?

JR: That was a happy accident. Mary Peterson was working on the story and we were doing a lot of back-​and-​forth, when suddenly I could see what the story needed. I asked her if I could take some extreme liberties with the text, and she said yes. So, I did, and we decided to team up.

RVC: What’s the most useful lesson that came about from that book?

JR: That revising is really hard. We almost quit during revisions. The experience helped me understand what writers go through. I am a more empathetic agent because of that experience.

RVC: In this post-​COVID world, I like to ask a health and wellness question in interviews. Here’s yours. What do you do to de-stress? 

JR: I build and remodel houses in my mind—I remodel mine almost daily—and look at homes/​interior design stuff online. If I weren’t working in publishing, I’d be interested in working in construction.

RVC: One last question for this part of the interview. What forthcoming projects are you especially excited about? 

JR: I’ll talk only about picture books that have been announced so I’m not spoiling secrets. The dynamo duo of author Dev Petty and illustrator Mike Boldt have a book publishing this year called Elmore the Christmas Moose. It’s a hilarious story about a moose who applies to be one of Santa’s reindeer, except he can’t fly. They also have a second Life Lessons from Chip the Dog book coming next spring, this one called Don’t Trust Cats.

RVC: OPB did an interview with Dev right here! What else are you stoked about?

JR: Author-​illustrator Sasha Mayer has her first book in a new series coming, called Squash, the Cat. It’s a funny and joyful story about a girl named Maggie and her best friend, Squash, who is her cat. And author-​illustrator Renée Kurilla has a book called It’s Fall coming this year. It’s a rhyming story about the delights of fall, and it’s illustrated in a limited fall palette. It’s cozy and wonderful.

RVC: Alright, Jen. You’ve been waiting for it. I’ve been waiting for it. The OPB audience has been waiting for it. And it’s now here!! THE SPEED ROUND!!! Lightning-​fast questions followed by shockingly short answers, please. Are you ready?

JR: Yes.

RVC: Guiltiest reading pleasure?

JR: I don’t feel guilty about any of it.

RVC: If someone narrated your life, who would you want to be the narrator? 

JR: Marin Ireland.

RVC: Which Indigo Girls song would make the best picture book? 

JR: My heart bursts that you ask this question because nobody ever has. And I know the answer because I’ve spent time thinking about it. It’s “Power of Two.” The illustrations would depict a parent picking up a child from school, and then they go on a drive to have a picnic and hike around and play in a field of sorts. Or something like this. Sorry this wasn’t a short answer!

RVC: What’s the One That Got Away?

JR: I will never, ever tell.

RVC: When your kidlit career is finally complete, what text should be on the career tombstone?

JR: “So What?” Juuuust kidding.

RVC: Thanks so much, Jen! This was a real treat.

JR: Thank YOU, Ryan!

Educational Activities: Watch Out for the Lion! by Brooke Hartman

Watch Out for the Lion!
Author: Brooke Hartman
Illustrator: Anna Süßbauer
7 February 2023
Page Street Kids
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Readers beware—there’s a ferocious lion in this book! The book warns that it has seen the lion already. First its bristly tail, then clashing claws, twitchy ears, fearsome fangs… and it’s lying in wait to turn any unsuspecting passerby into a child cheeseburger or rugrat ravioli.

But does a brushy tail always belong to a lion? When you touch the curvy claws, will they be attached to a paw? You never really know what might be lurking around the corner in this surprising story that challenges readers to face their darkest fears, and maybe even laugh about them.


Educational Activities inspired by Watch Out for the Lion!:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • What do you think this book will be about?
    • Where and when is this story taking place?
    • How do you think this story is going to end?
    • Who do you think the main character is? What do you think they might be like?
    • What are you looking forward to learning or discovering in the book?
    • Have you read any other books by the same author or illustrator? If so, what did you like about them?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • Despite all the warnings about the lion, did you ever feel as if you should stop reading? Why/​why not?
    • Which of the creatures that wasn’t a lion were you most surprised to find in this book?
    • What did you think of the book’s ending?
    • What do you think is the message of the story?
    • Which picture did you like the most? Why?
    • Did you enjoy this book? Why/​why not?
  • Drawing–Much of the fun of this book comes from seeing how part of an animal looks like it could be part of a lion. What other animals could be mistaken for a lion because of their teeth, fur, claws, or other features? (Maybe a snake, elephant, eagle, or hippo?) Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to show how one or more of these animals might just look like a lion. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Crafting–Lions are awesome, so let’s create some of our own by crafting. Get an adult to help! 
  • Further Reading–Lions are pretty cool, so let’s check out other picture books about these mighty, ferocious animals. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

Author Interview: Kirsten Larson

This month’s Author Interview is with Kirsten Larson, a Los Angeles writer who “writes books for curious kids.” Not only has she published a number of fine nonfiction picture books, but she’s also created a middle grade graphic nonfiction book and more than two dozen books for the school and library market.

In addition to all of her writing, Kirsten teaches at The Writing Barn and serves as a “nonfiction and query corner ‘elf’” for Julie Hedlund’s popular 12x12 Picture Book Writing Challenge. Kirsten’s also the proud owner of a house “filled with LEGOs, laughter, and lots of books.”

Let’s find out more about how Kirsten does all of this!


 

RVC: It’s strange to think how many interviews I’ve done for this blog with current and former rocket scientists, and you’re in the club, too. There’s probably a STEM joke in there somewhere…

KL: Actually, I’m not a rocket scientist, but I worked WITH rocket scientists at NASA.

RVC: For the purpose of jokemaking, I think that totally counts! But for factual reasons, what did you actually do there?

KL: I handled public relations for NASA’s Space Shuttle and International Space Station programs, as well as their aeronautics programs. It was great training for science storytelling through print, video, and photography as well as for working with news media.

RVC: What’s the most common misconception people have about rocket scientists?

KL: I think many people have a very Big Bang Theory/​Sheldon Cooper perception of rocket scientists, as in they are so smart they don’t have a sense of humor or are almost robots. But most rocket scientists I’ve met are pretty regular people often with great senses of humor and a myriad of interests.

RVC: Now here’s the Saturn V‑sized question we’re all dying to know—how did yet another former NASA person begin writing picture books?

KL: My kids loved nonfiction books when they were little. At the public library, they’d pull books off the shelves about space, weather. Anything, really. As I read the books with them, I began to think I could probably write them, and would love an excuse to become a mini expert in all kinds of different topics.

RVC: Let’s talk about you the writer. What aspect of your writing life gives away where you’re from and how you were raised? 

KL: I write about a lot of different things–art, history, science, engineering. My parents really encouraged a love of learning. My mom was a schoolteacher with shelves of picture books we all read together. And my parents had other shelves packed with mystery novels, poetry, Shakespeare, Russian literature, you name it. And then there was my grandmother with her full set of encyclopedias. I was encouraged to read whatever I wanted. There weren’t any limits. And I read everything.

RVC: Who are some of your kidlit world heroes?

KL: I’m a big fan of Melissa Stewart. She has some of the best classroom resources around for teachers working with students on informational writing. And Melissa is such a champion of nonfiction for kids in general, which can get short shrift by teachers and librarians who often prefer fiction. I just read Melissa’s Tree Hole Homesillustrated by Amy Hevron–which is excellent.

RVC: Let’s zero in on YOUR books. What’s the story behind your first published picture book?

KL: My first picture book was Wood, Wire, Wings: Emma Lilian Todd Invents an Airplane, which is illustrated by Tracy Subisak (Calkins Creek). I learned about Lilian Todd through an illustration in the bestselling book Rosie Revere, Engineer by Andrea Beaty, illustrated by David Roberts. I have lived and worked around airplanes my whole life and had never heard of her! I made it my mission to make sure the world knew about her.

RVC: What’s the most useful lesson that book taught you?

KL: Writing is a lot like engineering. You write a draft. That’s your prototype. But then you test it with your critique group and tweak it to improve it. And failure is always part of the process. You have to persist.

RVC: What part of that book are you most proud of?

KL: I really learned how to write on that book, thanks to my editor, Carolyn Yoder. It took me a long time to figure out how to write emotionally resonant scenes, as well as the structure, which follows the engineering design process.

RVC: Please put the following in order. 

  • I wrote my first picture book.
  • I got an agent.
  • I started writing for the education market.
  • I became a writing coach.
  • I did a glorious interview with the much beloved picture-​book blog, Only Picture Books.

KL:

  1. I wrote my first picture book.
  2. I started writing for the education market.
  3. I got an agent.
  4. I became a writing coach.
  5. I did a glorious interview with the much-​beloved picture-​book blog, Only Picture Books (which is obviously the pinnacle of my career! )

RVC: Love it! Now, in retrospect, would you have done it differently if you could’ve changed the order?

KL: You mean, besides speeding up the whole process from writing my first picture book to getting an agent, which took four years? Just kidding. I’m pretty happy with the way things went.

RVC: How did getting an agent affect your writing career?

KL: I think it’s really tough to work without an agent in today’s market. Fewer and fewer publishers take unsolicited submissions. So, aside from being able to sell work, working with Lara (Perkins of Andrea Brown Literary Agency) has made me a better writer for sure.

RVC: What’s Lara’s agenting superpower?

KL: She’s the right type of editorial agent for me, always asking the right questions or helping me brainstorm, so I can create the books I envision. And she’s great at encouraging me not to give up when I take on hard things and then try to backtrack.

RVC: What would Lara say is your writing superpower?

KL: My superpower is a willingness to completely reimagine manuscripts. We’re talking complete restructuring of a picture book or accepting a challenge to turn a picture book into a graphic novel script. On the latest picture book I’m working on, I tossed out everything but the title. And I’ve done that several times with this particular book.

RVC: I notice that you enjoy using alliteration, even though you’re primarily writing nonfiction picture books vs, say, humorous poetry or read-​a-​loud fiction.

KL: I learned a lot about writing lyrically from Renee LaTulippe of the Lyrical Language Lab. You can punch up any prose with poetic techniques, making it more musical and fun to read.

RVC: What’s your best tip for creating effective alliteration?

KL: My alliteration secret weapon is the Thesaurus.com. Maybe I’ve written that the bee is flying. I can look up synonyms for fly and come up with “the bee buzzes,” for example. My other biggest tip is not to overdo the alliteration, or you might find your reader tripping over the words.

RVC: You write a lot of picture book nonfiction, and not just for the educational market. Why are you so drawn to those?

KL: As you know, picture books take a LONG time, even before you sell them to a publisher. It’s so important to pick stories you are passionate about and don’t mind coming back to over and over again in revision. I have more stamina when it comes to writing nonfiction. I care more deeply about sharing those stories, and I feel more invested in getting them right.

RVC: You’ve got a new picture book coming out this month—The Fire of Stars: The Life and Brilliance of the Woman Who Discovered What Stars Are Made Of. What’s the elevator pitch?

KL:  Astronomer and astrophysicist Cecilia Payne was the first person to discover what burns at the heart of stars. This lyrical picture book biography powerfully parallels the kindling of Cecilia Payne’s own curiosity and her scientific career with the process of a star’s birth, from mere possibility in an expanse of space to an eventual, breathtaking explosion of light.

RVC: Picture books in general, but nonfiction ones in specifics, are all about trimming, trimming, trimming, even though the initial material is often so darn great (and often 5x the length of any sensible picture book). Given that sobering editorial reality, what terrific thing didn’t make it into the final iteration of the new book?

KL: Um, Cecilia Payne’s entire career? The book ends with Cecilia’s discovery that stars are mostly hydrogen and helium. She was 25, and it was her dissertation. She wasn’t even employed as an astronomer yet! But Cecilia’s pursuit of the thrill of discovery was what the book was about. So I had to move so much to the timeline in the back matter, including all her work as an astronomer at Harvard where she eventually became the first woman to serve as head of the Astronomy Department (in 1956, 21 years later!)

RVC: I rarely ask people questions about writing coaching, so I’m going to remedy that right now. What made you choose to become a writing coach?

KL: Even before I began to teach nonfiction writing, people would ask if I did manuscript critiques, but I always declined. Finally, I decided the universe was trying to tell me something, and maybe I did have something to offer my fellow writers. I take a very collaborative approach, trying to help writers achieve their vision for the story and tuning into why the story is so important for them to tell.

RVC: In all of your experience as a writing coach, what has surprised you the most?

KL: I’m always surprised at how it’s far easier to help clients diagnose and fix their manuscripts, but so difficult to see my own work clearly. When your heart is on the page, it’s tough to take a step back and look at the work objectively and ask if it’s achieving what you want it to achieve.

RVC: What’s the best advice you’d give to someone considering hiring a writing coach to help them break into the picture book marketplace?

KL: First, I would say that most of the time, you don’t need to pay a book coach or editor before submitting your picture book to agents or editors. Most people don’t. I think coaches can be helpful when you’ve exhausted your resources, like your critique partners for example, and you are stuck and need a fresh set of eyes. But people also need to remember, hiring a coach isn’t magic. Getting a book published is part luck and timing too, not just great writing. If I knew exactly what would sell at any point in time, I’d have dozens of books under contract.

RVC: One final question for this part of the interview, Kirsten. It’s brag time! What projects do you have on the NASA launch pad beyond The Fire of Stars?

KL: I have two upcoming projects that I’m able to share. I have the graphic novel The Light of Resistance, illustrated by Barbara McClintock (Roaring Brook), the true story of Rose Valland, a French curator turned spy who saved countless precious art works from the Nazis. My next picture book is This Is How You Know, illustrated by Cornelia Li (Little, Brown), a lyrical love letter to science.

RVC: Alrighty! It’s now time for the NASA-​rocketship-​fast SPEED ROUND. Let’s begin with an old black-​and-​white science fiction film countdown to create some delicious drama.

THREE

TWO

ONE

BLAST OFF!!!!

RVC: If you could only have one app on your phone, it’d be… 

KL: Oh, geez. I’ll go with Libby, the library app. I was never a big ebook reader before March 2020. But when libraries shut down, Libby was the only way I could get new books at first. And I learned I loved eBooks (for reading novels, not picture books). I put books on hold and can check them out as they become available or ask the library to come back to me if I’m not ready yet. And I don’t lose my place in line. Plus, how handy is it to have a book in your back pocket or purse at all times for those moments you’re stuck in a long check-​out line?

RVC: What animal or plant should be renamed?

KL: Naked mole rats are neither moles nor rats. Who came up with this name? Interestingly, they are the only eusocial mammals, operating much like honeybees do in their hive.

The naked mole rat shall henceforth be known as HivePup. These guys totally deserve some love.

RVC: If you had a NASA rocket that you wanted to hide, where would you stash it?

KL: Definitely in the back of a giant refrigerator. Based on my experiences with my family, no one would ever move things around and find it. (They tease me that my response to all their “Where is?” questions is, “You have to move some things around.”)

RVC: What are five things you couldn’t do your writing without?

KL: Coffee. Books–and not just for research. I am a big advocate for using books in your category and genre as mentor texts. The internet–I am always amazed at the things I can now get online that I had to read on microfiche 20 years ago. My Macbook–I cannot write on a phone or iPad. Journal–I’m a visual writer, and I often thumbnail out the structure of books spread by spread, especially when revising.

RVC: Who sets the standard for writing STEM picture books?

KL: Rather than pointing out someone who sets the standard, I want to point out the diversity in STEM storytelling these days, which is so amazing. We are really in a golden age of STEM books. You have STEM books showcasing neurodiversity (like Jen Malia’s Too Sticky!) and cultural traditions (like Rajani LaRocca’s Bracelets for Bina’s Brothers). Funny books like Sue Heavenrich’s 13 Ways to Eat a Fly. And lovely, lyrical books like Be a Tree by Maria Gianferrari. There is truly something for everyone.

RVC: What’s the best compliment a child ever gave your writing?

KL:  One of my favorite thank you notes had this riddle: “What do you call a great book? WOOD, WIRE, WINGS!” Kids are so clever.

RVC: Thanks so much, Kirsten!